Why did he kidnap her? *(Dun dun dun)*

i hope you get over your writer's block soon, as this is just getting interesting!

Woot! I love it! The suspence is killing me! If you want to, you can PM me for any ideas since you has a writer's block :) Keep it up!

This is really really interesting! Hurry up and do Chapter 2 ! :D

Hi!_

I can sympathize with you - Writer's Block is the bane of every single writer in the world and definitely can be nasty. So this short chapter is a good start to getting out of the Block._

Just keep up the good work!_

Hey I like it. I want to know what Hannibal really is up to. 'o' Update please! Like your writing too.

sweeeeeett

:D Yay, an update! *Dances around stupidly with a party hat on whilst throwing confetti into the air. XD*

I was strangely happy when I read the news reporters report about Mason's "Accident" XD. This chap was still a little too short though, and the words still aren't fitting together :/, but you need not fret because I did notice improvement :).

Update soon and have fun when you write!

I really like your story, I read all of the chapters so far and I really want to know what's gonna happen. What with you teasing us at the end of every chapter and all.

I do have some things I think you should work on though.

You're a little too descriptive of her surrondings, ease up a bit. And you need to give her some real emotion, she seems kinda empty. Also try to make the words fit together like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, they don't seem to fit right. The chapters could be longer too, I always want more when I finish reading.

It really is a good story, and I'll definitely be checking up on it. Update soon please!

Hmm...the "curiosity killed the cat" line gives me mixed feelings. I don't feel like Lecter would say it, but then again...We'll see what happens next.

Wow Jennifer's mom is so...chill (Haha). Next chapter.

You keep Lecter's dialogue good (I could imagine him saying these fragments), but I don't think he'd wish to be referred to by his first name SO quickly. As well, he is really good at hiding his emotions, so I don't think he'd be so expressive to show such hunger-cravings...I do like the feelings Jennifer is having, they are realistic to her situation. Next chapter.

Alright so this is the intro. chapter. It's going good, not to much action, but that's okay. Jennifer's character at this point seems...well let's just read the next chapter.

I think you have Dr Lecter's character portrayed well in the way that he speaks, though I don't think that he would be so informal with Jennifer on the first session. In the SotL, he tells Clarice that she may call him Dr Lecter because of her age, and I was expecting something similiar here. And I wasn't so sure about the idea of hunger either. Only because Dr Lecter is a very calm man who can control his urges or desires and they would not be apparent in his eyes for face.

I do, however, look forward to seeing where you take this. I can see many paths for this fic.

Can I suggest that you split the first sentence into two sentences, as all of that information in one can be a bit of a mouthful. I hope that my suggestions can help you. :)

This ought to be good XD