Cool story :)

no moree! dont end this please!

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The plot thickens... and I'm left wanting more Billy&Jane! But if you're going through a rough patch updating FanFiction is the last thing you should be stressing about. Just saying. God bless!

I love it! I love the Billy and Jane-ness of this chapter.. it's so them and I can totally picture them sitting at lunch talking like this or something. Just a word of advice, while writing you should create the setting (ie where the situation is taking place) incorporate what the narrator sees and feels because it adds a personal touch. If you set up the background then it's easier for the readers to imagine what's going on and things like that.. I hope that helped you :) Please continue!

Aew this is really good! Keep updating ! :) i hope billy and jane end up together in this story ;)