Aw, poor England. I have to admit, I fell for the trick at the end of chapter 1...

Fix your grammar mistakes, no offense but that's one of my pet peeves. If you want to talk to me just answer back. Digimon Rules!

I'm so touched that this wonder piece of literature was dedicaited to me.

Aw, Sarah is such a lucky girl.

Why do sck so much?
All you people encouraging him are retarded.
This is as bad as Hons von Hozel's writing.
This story sucked **.
Thank you and learn how to spell.

You sir, the next Shakespeare, you words move me.

This story really helped me get through my struggle with my girlfriend. We broke up because she was moving away, and for a long time, I couldn't deal with the misery. But when I read about how Digimon's girlfriend moved to Englind, and I saw the pain that he was experiencing because of it... Well, let's just say for the first time I felt like I'd really connected with a fictional character. Without this, I think I'd still be trying to stalk her. Thank you.

THats lol.

"Digimon was ta hom eatnig breffist. He ate a omelette and toast with english muffins and he had bagels and Cap'n Crunch.
He was also eating orange juice a muffin and sausage and a bacon piece but he also ate just bread."

This is an amazing literary passage because there is a twist at the end. The reader is led to believe that Digimon is eating an omelet, toast, english muffins, bagels, and Cap'n Crunch, but in reality, Digimon is just eating bread. Perhaps Digimon is poor and the only thing he can afford to eat is bread, but he is an optimist as well, so maybe he just imagines that he is eating all of the other things as well. He is obviously a very deep character and we must analyze him very carefully.

Thank you for your enormous contribution to the world of literature!

Two words for you...

YOU SUCK! End of story.

LMFAO

For the love of!... I envy you! my English prof was also my P.E. and every time we screw something up especially in his English class (e.g. Mispronunciation etc.) you would look forward for the world to end since P.E. is our next subject... do you want to meet him? Sheesh! seriously there's something called a dictionary, its not only used for meanings but also for your SPELLING!
(Thank God he created the ones who made Merriam-Webster)

This...Is so terrible. Seriously, do you even have the simplest grasp of the English Language? Do you even know what a spell check is? There's no plot, no characterization, you don't even have names for most of you characters, just titles. A person isn't a title. In-context physics fails royally, and the fight scene was ridiculous.
I've seen some bad stuff on this site, I have. But This...This is even worse than The former writers Milleniummon and Arcangemon, and they were terrible; with barely even a grasp of which they were writing.
And you reviewers, what the hell? This has been dead for Six and a half years, and you still review this affront to all that is fanfiction. Are the lot of you so seriously deprived of literature that this garbage is good.

/Rant.
Had to get that off my chest, this is the stuff that makes the sommunity a joke.

so much better than the first

keep writing

::SPOILER ALERT::

In chapter 2, the evil Digimon is not reely dead. It swa a trick!!