I just found your stories and I wanted to tell you that this was wonderful. I've seen the episode and found this to be the perfect ending to it.

Great Job!

Barney may later regret asking for a tanning when he deserves it! Bill will follow through on that promise.
They make a good Dad and son team. I'd love to see more of them sometime.
I'm rereading all of your stories. I love them all.

wow good one

I always liked this episode and thought the actors did a very good job...especially Bill. I think your story was a nice touch to add to this episode...loved Wagon Train!

Great ... Yay wagon train stories. Poignant episode , thoughtful extension ... Well done .