Beautifully done. Please write more.

Well, it was about time someone did the "it was all a dream" scenario, and you've done it really well! There's something rather poetic about the "don't cry, my love" refrain, returning again and again within the structure of the piece. There's so many poignant moments, I particularly like "I can't help it". Thank you so much for writing.

Very good more plese

Oh, I thought I wasn't going to like this, but you saved it in the end! This is really lovely.

Absolutely beautiful story! Very well written and obviously well thought out.