I can't belive you killed Ben and Kay!
They , they were perfect!
Plz plz plz can u write some miraculas change so they live?
Plz Plz Plz
I'm begging you!

hey why did ben die

"oh my god." this was probobly the best story I ever read. It felt like I was watching an episode on darkangel but in my head. The ending though was sad I wish ben and kay didn't have to dye.the ending kinda made me cry. I gotta say this wa a realy good story.

thats so sad! is this the end??

That's sooooo sad!But the rest of the story....one word comes to mind. WOW!

oh...that was sad...did she really die? I think 'Paradise' fits your story perfectly. After you announced the title of the song, I went to find her CD. Now it's playing on my CD player, lol.

As for the transgenic and Familiar thing, it somewhat reminds me of the RPG I'm in. The thing with the Coming and the key also happens to be a part of the RPG...lol. I've never found a story so close to the RPG except for those by people in the RPG, not that it's a bad or anything.

I hope you write a sequel...or is this not the end? Anyway, whatever you do, keep up the good work and best of luck!

Interesting! Keep up the good work! Update soon. :)

This is a really great story. I hope you don't leave it on a cliffhanger, it's getting really interesting!

can't wait for the unpredictable ending.

Interesting! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

Ooo, the Coming. Been waiting for that. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!! Keep up the good work!

Wohoo!

A new chapter in one of my favourite fics!

I really like this story. You've done a great job with Kay, she really feels like someone who's supposed to be in the series. The way you've taken her story and put it together with all the events from season 2 and the flashbacks from manticore is really impressive.

It will be intressting to see what Sketchy will do now. :)

Thanks for taking your time to upload this one for us (I just assume you write it for your own pleasure, else - thanks for that too. :) )

wheww...that was once again...long. Can't wait to read the next chapter...but wouldn't mind if it were a little shorter...it's your choice though. Keep up the good work!:)

Wheww...that was one of the longest I've ever read! Not that it's a bad thing. I like the way you connected the story to Max's life. Great job! I enjoy the insults you throw at White too. Keep up the good work!:)

thanku so much for updating.I really loved how u had the dream sequences and then brought kody into it.hehe u finally got kay and ben 2gether.only took u a few chapters ,just joking.so get plz get working on hte next chapter plzzzz.I will be so greatfull :)