|Reviews for God Help Me|
| Caroline Grace 2/11/13 . chapter 4
I like this one too! The characters are written in the same spirit as the ones in the play; meaning they talk the way I image John and Elizabeth and Abigail would talk. And the feeling of tension in everything (especially in the Proctor house) is something you build really well.
I like the reference to the mould on the rye (you are referring to the ergot theory of what was going on in Salem, yes?)
Looking forward to more!
| Writingisapassion48 1/1/13 . chapter 4
Good story like it so far, nice to get into John Proctor's head and what he was thinking during this.
| RuJa4EVA 12/21/12 . chapter 1
Oh gosh, this is so lovely, I do hope you'll continue 3
| Clara Bright 10/15/12 . chapter 3
This is very well written :) I always wondered what might have happened with John, Elizabeth and Abigail before the setting of the story :) well done, post the next chapter soon please! :)
| The Original Horcrux 9/10/12 . chapter 2
Ah that was amazing! You've got Abigail, Parris and Johns personalization down perfectly and the dialogue was perfect and fitted in with the times perfectly! Can't wait for the next update :)
| The Original Horcrux 9/8/12 . chapter 1
Well technically I'm doing my History Elective homework :) (I have to read the Crucible but I've read it like six times... So I figured that Fanfiction would be the next best thing :) I really liked the beginning of this and I can't wait for the Abigail/John smut *ahem* I mean fluff.