I like this one too! The characters are written in the same spirit as the ones in the play; meaning they talk the way I image John and Elizabeth and Abigail would talk. And the feeling of tension in everything (especially in the Proctor house) is something you build really well.
I like the reference to the mould on the rye (you are referring to the ergot theory of what was going on in Salem, yes?)
Looking forward to more!

Good story like it so far, nice to get into John Proctor's head and what he was thinking during this.

Oh gosh, this is so lovely, I do hope you'll continue 3

This is very well written :) I always wondered what might have happened with John, Elizabeth and Abigail before the setting of the story :) well done, post the next chapter soon please! :)

Ah that was amazing! You've got Abigail, Parris and Johns personalization down perfectly and the dialogue was perfect and fitted in with the times perfectly! Can't wait for the next update :)

Well technically I'm doing my History Elective homework :) (I have to read the Crucible but I've read it like six times... So I figured that Fanfiction would be the next best thing :) I really liked the beginning of this and I can't wait for the Abigail/John smut *ahem* I mean fluff.