Oh! please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaa seeeee continue this. I'm loving it, I'm not used to see my Ninty like this ;A; but I like it!
I want/need to now what happens next pleease! A It's so awsome!

I'm gonna be honest with you, script formatting pisses me off. I don't like feeling like I'm reading a script. I DO like this story though, so I'll put up with the different styles of formatting.

This is just adorable! But it's really sad so far too. Keep it up!

Ok, I love the lucasXness couple! Not really a fan of NessXNinten. Love, love the NintenXCluas couple. Okay with CluasXLucas, but prefer NintenXCluas instead. So far, really dramatic! But I like drama!