Wow, that was really great. So sweet, funny and HAPPY! Yay! Made me smile. Heck, made me laugh, especially when Xel realized he´s really one of the group. Good work! ^_^

WAI WAI WAI!!!!! This was one of the most heartwarming, special, amazingly written stories I've ever read. This left me with such an exstatic feeling of joy that you'd never believe words could make someone that happy. Excellent job, and every word was totally true. There's definitely no way Xellos could ever live without the Slayers, because he is one himself. Beautifully done. Bravo and encore!!!! XELLOS 4-EVER!!! And xel/zel...heh heh heh....sorry. --Umi-chan and Da Bish--

Ah! What a wondeful, happy story!

*grin* There's just something about this... yes, all five slayers. *grin* He's where he belongs, if nothing else. Even if they are just playthings, they are everything. I would suggest, however, making the song lyrics in italics or bold or even in stars. Something to seperate them from the story. =)

Awww... Filia not a part of the group?
Other than that I liked it! ^_^
Very good.