Cute! I'm glad you didn't make Shizuo a rapist, he really isn't so bad.

You have grown so much as a writer! I remember this to be a paragraph before. You did really well in the emotion of it all and I think you kept to the characters too. I LOVE Baccano and I'm sad that its not a very popular anime. Plus come on, I nearly died when I saw Issac and Marie in Durarara. Of course they would be there and in the dollars. I follow these reviewers (Gigguk and GRArkada) that love this anime as well and are trying to push it. I do hope there is a sequel and I hope you have more stories to share. Till next time.

Snort. That was awesome.

/ that was awesome

That was one hell of a smut all right .-. just add a lil more detail, and put the emotion nd feelings between them, it was vague, and it was good but it just needs work. But it was pretty good

Please write more ,more wip and spanking scenes would be nice hmmm and more torture for the cute little flea please for me

My advice:
Space out your sentences (no like reading thick paragraphs)
You should add the cute sign at the end of a moan to make it look sexier XD
You should describe it more specificly

Other than that it is incredibly sexy OuO
*nosebleed*
You should write more Shizaya bondage!

i like this alot. :) keep at it and would love to read more stories from you.

It was good, but if I can make a suggestion, space the text out, because it isn't very pleasant to read large slabs of text like this.

So. Much. Yumminess

Please make more sexy chapters! 3

Mm possessive shizuo! Sexy

-nosebleed- thats was really hot *_*

Ive notice you never mentioned the vibrator being taken out of him...

Aww, that was sweet of Shinra and Celty to do that for their friend; great story! I can't wait to see more work from you!

3 Spirit