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Abby
2006-11-26 . chapter 9
QUOTE:
I haven’t had a chance to write Christmas in this ficcy yet (next chapter, I swear),

LIES! There will be no next chapter if you do not post! -cries-

I love all your stories...please keep writing! It's what gets me through seniour year. xD

~Abbs
Shiro Ryuu
2006-09-08 . chapter 9
T_T You mean to tell me that this one isn't finished either? Oh, the humanity... *huge, dramatic sigh*... Well, in any case, I absolutely love what there /is/ of the story ;) It's just so... so... comfy ^^ Not to mention hilarious, and adorable, and, and, why isn't there more?! Gah...
gymnastsanonymous07
2006-03-12 . chapter 9
hello! i just found this story today and its simply wonderful! i can't wait for the next part of the story esp with the whole draco malfoy bit and the muggle/james bit! hehehehe...you are gonna continue right? cuz from it looks like, u haven't updated in forever! im just wondering whether you will finish...but i love it so far..so please keep writing
yourheartsdesire
2005-12-30 . chapter 9
Please pick up this story again! I love your stories, but you never finish the ones I like best!
circumambientrose
2004-10-20 . chapter 9
I guess you've quit working on this story, which is really too bad. I loved your work with the characters, and I loved your OOCs, which is unusual for me. Good work, and I'll check out your other stories.
circumambientrose
2004-10-20 . chapter 8
I loved this chapter, my favorite so far. I especially like Severus and Lottie's relationship. Their letters to their moms regarding each other were great.
Pen2Paper
2004-09-06 . chapter 9
Wow. Post more!
Pen2Paper
2004-09-06 . chapter 6
This is a great story. You're a good writer.

Do I really have to give critisicm? (sp?)

I've just made an observation. I'm up to chapter six or seven, and I've noticed it getting repeptitive. What are coniptions? That is the word that seems to pop up a lot.

But other than that, Your story is great!
PeppermintNan
2004-06-30 . chapter 9
I loved that! I love Lily's character, she's so cool! I can't wait to see what happens to all of them! Oh, and why did Abigail get so angry about James' comment on Lily?
vamperfly
2004-03-07 . chapter 9
Wow...seriously, all i can say is wow. This story rocks and i love it. So-update as soon as you're not swamped (spring break's coming up--hint hint ;)
kelpylion
2003-11-28 . chapter 8
Ah, a clever change of tone with this chapter. Two things: How did Narcissa get injured, because I don't really think a social queen would fall down the stairs. And, you like chess quite a bit, don't you?
kelpylion
2003-11-28 . chapter 1
Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant brilliant Brilliant brilliant brilliant! Among 40,0+ HP fanfics, finally one with some originality and and interesting narrative style. Fabulous!
Shoren
2003-07-25 . chapter 9
This is a very good story. I love Lily's firey temper. Now the only thing left to do is have her kick James' butt then make up with him ^_^ Otherwise, like I said, very good story. It's very hard to find a harry potter story worth reading nowadays.
Stormy1x2
2003-07-06 . chapter 9
Awesome! James is a prat, Remus and Sirius are adorable, Lottie is a card and Abby - oh excuse me - ABIGAIL - is a delight! ^^

I wonder what Lucius has in store for Lily? Especially considering he's only eleven. A very mature eleven, but a child nonetheless...
gothic-wafer
2003-06-21 . chapter 9
this is awesome! It made me smile and giggle like a schoolgirl!
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