Reviews for Try, Try Again
fanficfantasies 2/24/13 . chapter 1
Nice... good job Dave. The 'clear your mind' thing would annoy me too, though.
DarkMousyRulezAll 10/30/12 . chapter 1
XD hahahaha nice, very funny, and pretty well written!

-DMRA
domidomi 9/14/12 . chapter 1
Wow, will you finish this?
How would Balthazar react when something really dangerous happens?