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Naw d'EviL Blume 5/6/13 . chapter 1Hiya. Hmmm... intriguing! What is it that changing Miria's decision? Please continue! |
Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 1 Ok, has this story on hiatus, because, I've been checking for updates, and their haven't been any. I hope you have plans of continuing. It's a good story so far. |
Guest 2/14/13 . chapter 1 So, umm. This introduction seems pretty freaking awesome, and I was sorta wondering if your gonna continue it. Don't be writing interesting stories if your never goning to finish them. It's mean. I still remain hopeful, and I'm also keeping tabs on updates for Awake and Alive. |
Guest 2/2/13 . chapter 1 More? Will there be more? Don't be leaving a yuri fan hanging. I like this story. keep going. |
Guest 1/28/13 . chapter 1 Wicked! Clare is freakin' awesome. Please keep writing. I want to know what Miria saw in the files to make her want to tuder Clare. Also, looking forward to the rest of Awake and Alive. |
Guest 1/26/13 . chapter 1 Awesome story, so far. I really like the Miria/Clare pairing. I never thought of them as a couple, until I read some of your fanfics, and I must say, it's now my favorite. I hope you keep up with this story. I'm dying to know what happens. Plus, I like the fact that Clare's a badass. Also, can't wait for Awake and Alive. |
Sa Rart 12/9/12 . chapter 1It's fascinating and good so far! I'm excited to read... but there's so little here to read ;_; One thing - "it's" means "it is" while "its" means "belonging to it." Just so you know. "The room was welcoming but still kept it's serious flair to it." Just a little grammatical thing. Looking forward to the rest of the story! |
KilluaKitty00 11/23/12 . chapter 1 Interesting idea...quite surprised that you're using Miria as the tutor for Clare. Can't wait for next chapter! |
shon613 11/3/12 . chapter 1Its interesting so far please continue |
Mojo-jojo 9/21/12 . chapter 1 woah clare is fucked up nice start:) |
noline 9/10/12 . chapter 1 j'adore met vite une suite |
Kelly'sShadow 9/10/12 . chapter 1 Hell yeah, badass Clare! I love it! I love Claymore AU and the MiriaxClare has already caught my attenion. can't wait to see what happens next! |
TheSilentChloey 9/9/12 . chapter 1Interesting, it looks good! |
E 9/6/12 . chapter 1 it has a interesting plot going on... i would like if u could continue the story please?:) |
Drifting Reader 9/6/12 . chapter 1Nice introduction you have here. I see potential in this story and how Miria and Clare will eventually get together. I'm interested on where you will be taking this. -Ann |