 Tearle 2009-10-01 . chapter 7*sigh* I don't know why I keep reading your work! I'm hooked to your style of writing, to your stories -- I need them like a drug!!
And then, I just get disappointed, knowing I'll never see the ends of these -_-
If you ever get an inkling to finish any of these, know that they'll be read. |
 Madame Naberrie 2005-11-12 . chapter 7Where do I even begin? I could write chapters on this story, endless chapters upon chapters declaring you the ultimate God of Writing, if there is indeed such a God. This was, without a doubt, the best story I have ever read in my entire life, and I do not say this lightly. The story, perfect. The feeling, flawless. The emotion was so deep and real, that I myself felt as if I were the ghost Padme was seeing through the corner of her eye, watching the lives of these two people. This story has a much deeper meaning than just Star Wars. This is a beautiful piece, I cannot describe. You have an amazing amout of talent, and if I were not a christian I would be worshipping you right now. I desperately hope that you have not stopped writing this magnificent story, as it has been so long since you last posted. Then again, it has taken you two years to post seven chapters. If, for whatever reason, you have stopped writing this story, then I have no reason to live anymore. I do not think I can stress this anymore: you are the best of the best. Usually, when I give a review, I lie and say, "Oh yes, it was wonderful, I loved it!" even though I did not. I AM NOT LYING ABOUT THIS. This is the most...I cannot even put it into words. The way that Padme feels, after all that Anakin has done to her, is so incredibely human that I wanted to scream at Anakin for being so cruel. Some people portray her as clingy and inhumanly forgiving after the death of Darth Vader. I love how you portrayed her as if she is scared to touch him, scared to know he still loves her (even though that's not really the point of the story). I adore the relationship with Luke and his mother. I especially love the way he went on and on about his aunt Beru and his feelings for her, as if he was regretting not allowing her to be his "mother." I love how you started this story, with him hearing in the market about the "Widow Skywalker," which is not only appropraite because it is her title, but it somehow suits her character. You have not strayed from the characters at all: Luke is Luke and Padme is Padme and I can easily believe it. That's so rare these days. Please, please, PLEASE, update as soon as you possibley can, or I might very well die of a broken heart. |