very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up!

Riviting story from start to finish. One of my favorits. Well done.

Wow, dude, that was evil. ^_^ I like evil. And KITT bonding with the little girl was sweet. ^_^ This fic is definetly one of my favorites. Good job. ^_^

I really enjoyed the interaction between KITT and the young girl in this one :D As usual, nicely written, and I liked the ending :D
Thanks for writing.
Gumnut

Wow! (applause) that was great! you actually had me in tears for a while. beautifully done! :-)

Hi! What a beautiful story. *Added to favorite stories* ^_~ I luv it!!

..:Iris:.

I think this is a very solid story.
I respect authors who tackle "subtle" dangers like torture scenes, because the art of setting a mood is much different from gun scenes.

The pacing was very well done... that's critical to a tale like this. it physically takes long enough to read ( backed by supporting details)so the rader experiences the long sense of impending doom. (Many starting writers tend to finish the thread too fast.)

I like the medically related twist of the anticoagulants. I don't recall seeing that twist before. So instead of simply bludgeoning the victim, Dawson uses the different method of blood loss weakness as his path. It looks like you did some homework behind the scenes, which almost always leads to good results.

And I like the twist where Michael realizes Dawson made a mistake( by revealing he didn't know what KITT was), and that gives Michael the hope.

When you have time, take a quick look at the spelling and spacing. For me it came out with 4 line breaks per sentence near the end, and there were some minor spelling errors. But I think it stands well as a story.

Regards,

OldPhoenix

An excellent story- very well written :D

alien

Incredably Good Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Action packed
kitt was great and so was michael

A wonderful story that read just like an episode!! How I felt for poor Michael and Kitt. Very well written. I hope you post more like this one. This so brings me back to the old days and the show I loved so much! You kept every character true to canon. I loved it!!! :)

Very emotional, and wonderful. I love reading your fics.

This was such a touching story! Michael was the one being abused, but I felt sorry for Kitt instead. *sheepish grin* You are one fantastic writer Vega, can't wait to see what new epic plot you come up with.

awesome story, bubba! i tell ya, i've read as many of the stories you've posted that i have the time to, and they're all really great. i just want to tell you how much i really enjoy them and to keep up the great work. i sure hope you have as much fun writing these as i do reading them : ) great job bubba.
peace out ya'll!

Awesome!
Simply awesome!