I just found this story today and read all the chapters so far and all I can say is 'Wow' and "when's the next chapter?" , you have me hooked :)

Wow - for a moment there, I thought Andrew was going to go too far. I was hoping his senses weren't that well trained and that the police could get a jump on him. I'm really not sure how much more of this Blair can take. Although I'm really glad that he was able to see Jim to give him some hope and help him deal with this awful situation he is in.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! :o)

Another great chapter - I love the way the whole story is developing.

"What you're doing; the mental hamster wheel. It's unproductive and the kid wouldn't want you to do it anyways." - what a great line and I could completely envision Simon saying it.

Hurry Guys! Blair really needs you to come and save the day!

Poor Blair - I can't imagine the level of determination he has to escape and the terror and misery he is feeling. This chapter, while wonderful, had my stomach doing flip-flops. How absolutely terrifying it must be that know one will listen to you and accept what you say as the truth.

Go Kevin!

Thanks for the great chapter. As always you really captivate and enthrall the reader.

What a shocker to find Eli okay and with Naomi. Blair will be happy when he finds out there both safe. Keep up the great work!

THANKS FOR ADDING TO THIS EXCITING STORY -I AM SO ENJOYING READING IT. HOPE YOU HAD A MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAVE A HAPPY-HEALTHY 2013!

Interesting story which I will read to its conclusion, but it's like I'm reading a story about a different James Ellison. The James Ellison in The Sentinel would never under any circumstances physically hurt Blair. Oh, he'd lash out at him verbally, which we've all seen him do countless times before, but to actually physically abuse his partner? Never under any circumstances what-so-ever! It's totally out of character and people don't change their spots or behaviors, not like THAT!

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Good chapter; I was spellbound.
Please don't keep us waiting so long for the next one!

Thanks for the great chapter! Poor Blair - Cooper really does know how to achieve his goals and be devious while doing it. Can't wait for the next installment :o)

Poor Blair...I hope his idea works for escape. And c'mon, Jim, find your Guide!

Great new chapter. I can't believe Eli is at the cabin with Naomi. Well, I guess Cooper can't be all bad...Drat!

Poor Blair, waking up and thinking that Jim had cooked for him only to find psycho Cooper has him. Cooper really holds all the cards at this point and his intelligence and medical background are truly disturbing for what could happen in the future. When he lunged and injected Blair in the neck, I just about had a cow!

Blair really has had to make some difficult decisions throughout this story. I love the way his innate goodness shines through.

Keep those chapters coming :o)

"All right, buddy. I know you're enjoying your little down time in La-la land but it's time for you to join us in the real world, Chief." - What a great line and I can just picture Jim's face as he's saying it.

Out of the pot and into the frying pan for Blair. Jim is going to be so PO'd.

This was a great blue jungle scene. I loved the history and symbolism throughout and the guidance from Incacha. I hope Blair takes all he has heard to heart.

Yeah! He's waking up!

The depth which you write Simon's thoughts and actions are spot on. What a great bridging chapter. I can't believe that doctor - how unprofessional.