Reviews for The Most Bitter Sting

Reviews For: The Most Bitter Sting

Moony73 2007-10-16 ch 5,	abuseI have a few things to point out, even though the story was put together wonderfully. I noticed a few spelling errors, in the case of 'ebony', and a few other words through the chapters. But in their case they were overlooked... everyone makes mistakes. No past tense problems which I was very satisfied with. The dialogue - especially with the Remus' departing when Sirius was admitted to Azkaban - it was amazing. It made them seem worn and longlasted and still reunited. You wrote the betrayal and years after James' and Lily's deaths and portayed it almost like a reflection from the previous incident between them and Severus. And it was unique, I noticed. Once again, the dialogue between them was amazing, though limited. You built Sirius' character, actions and personality perfectly. His forgiveness for Remus' misjudgements and false hatred, his iciness toward him - even when Sirius blamed himself for their deaths just as much as he blamed Peter - it was just so in character. His actions in and out of Azkaban were right on target as well. And Remus, even though he failed to admit it to himself, he completely refused, forgave Sirius himself in the end, dedicated himself to Sirius... it was what I call perfect character interaction. The ending was specifically touching. It was wonderful, Moony73
EsScaper 2006-10-09 ch 5,	abuseI was looking through the "older" stories posted and came across you wonderful piece! I thank you for the opportunity to read it. It was excellent!! You did a beautiful job describing Sirius and Remus's emotions. I especially loved how you described the Azkaban scene. It was so very realistic and powerful. It never lost any of its intensity, even when it was repeated throughout the story. It was just perfect! I loved how you made Sirius so vulnerable and frightened in the dark, and then desparately attempt to escape the "dementors". It shows that Azkaban truly did leave its toll on Sirius's mind. Having Remus see the effects of his "visit" in Azkaban was just what they both needed. It brought them to the first step towards fogiveness and healing. Thank God Remus stopped Sirius from leaving. The kiss was just right! Of course I was expecting Sirius to walk off into the sunset, as it were. I was absolutely delighted that you had Remus join him! It was an excellent twist for the end of the story that literally left this reader in goosebumps! ...sorry for rambling, but it was So good! Esc.
Matsuda-san 2006-04-10 ch 5,	abuseCheeseburger-san, this is absolutely beautiful. The style is breathtaking and amazing in it`s own way and I`m officially bawling on behalf of Sirius.. ;_; This is great stuff!
siriusienne & Aximilia 2005-12-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseHello DuoLordOfDeath, we have read your fic and want to traduce them in french! If it's not do please tell it to me then we will start the traduction! Siriusienne & Ax
MiserDea 2005-11-18 ch 5,	abuseThis story was amazing. I loved every part 'til the end. Lovely job. ~ Hyde
Ominee 2004-06-17 ch 1,	abuseOh this sounds good. Great chapter.
Sako Akarui 2003-01-25 ch 5,	abuseI loved it ^^ I was on the verge of tears the whole time, I swear...sigh, I'm such a softy... Don't let a void of reviews discourage you either!!! Quality over Quantity, right? -Sako
Kawaii Suteneko 2002-07-16 ch 1,	abusebah! Why must you always make me cry!? Poor Sirius... anywho, it was very good. I love your technique to create such emotion in your work, it's as if you're in the story actually watching the characters...
Eclectify 2002-07-16 ch 1,	abuseCome on...did you think I wouldn't review? sigh I've read this three times now and I still like it. And you used the whole quote in the summary! bounces happily

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