Loved this. Thank you for sharing your words!

very sweet story

I saw in a Facebook page that someone was looking for your story because she swore she saved it but it was gone and reading in the first chapter I know now why!
But that was The sweetest story of young love! have you thought of continuing!?

- "It's none of your business what I do when I'm with him. And now is just too late. So you have to stop thinking about me." But my voice quivered, my innermost thoughts shaking it up, thinking, Don't stop. Don't stop thinking of me. -

Forever in awe of you, Tam. You get people. Your characters are people, not caricatures.

- "I love you," he said, without looking at me, but he squeezed my hand and then walked straight down the stairs into the crowd. My heart might have stopped and taken all my breath with it. - best ever. So much love for this I love you.

- There is probably nothing better than feeling loved by the person you love, except perhaps seeing that person cry because of how much he loves you. - killed me dead, Phoebe.

- And that night—under the moon and stars, our tree's branches swaying above us, where we dreamed about a life together through old age—was our piece of forever.

Forever. It was like we'd taken it right from the sky and filled our pockets with it.

It was ours. It belonged to us. -

Your words are in my heart always and forever, and thank you for that, for that little piece of beauty I get to keep forever.

Shell x

Forever impressed by the amazing balance of a consistent voice, as well as Bella's growing maturity.

Beautiful.

Like you.

Shelly x

Lovelovelovelovelove! Read this whole thing in one sitting. It was sweet, and sexy and angsty and so teenage-esque. I adored these characters and they way you wrote them was poetic and painful and beautiful.

So so so much love :) xx

- I didn't tell him about how happy those girls had been while my heart was falling. - forever remembered words.

My heart is full of your characters, your words. You know that?

Shell x

Silly autocorrect.

I love your words. I love this story. So much truth.

I want to live in your words.

Shell xx

Really love it, thanks for this short but very pleasurable ride :)

Oh boy, they grew up so much, but still sweet :)

I'm so sad for them...

They're very cute :)

That's so sad. They weren't each other's first times like they promised they would be :(

So sweet! epi?

I literally cried. Thank you.