Oooh, things are getting intense! I'm totally getting hyped up for the next chapter! (Also, super psyched that the new chapter came out! I squealed.)
I love your plot! It's so thorough and detailed.
Mmm, I wonder when the others will learn about Cloud... heh!

Wow.
Will she realize that what is her creation's doing any time soon?
Will she fix all this problem up?

Hi!
I am new and just started reading this. I really like it! The changes and interactions of the characters are interesting and funny! But I have a question. Are you following the manga or novel? The manga hasn't been updating so I found a site that has been translating the novel. Its: www . princerevolution . org
(Just delete the spaces).
So, yeah. I though this would be of help.
Well, I can't wait for your next update! :)

Yay new chapter!
Loved it
*smiles*

Awe their interactions are so awesome and Undying Man is so funny. No wonder nobody wants him. I mean...shojo manga eyes? Even in real life i could imagine that. I can't imagine Prince new armour. And I can't wait for Yun to be crying in shock when he/she seen Eric's pic.

So sad!

great chapter and just want to say THANK YOU FOR MAKING A NEW ARMOR, I AM HATING THE OLD ONE, SO THANK YOU AGAIN THE ARMOR SUITS PRINCE PERFECTLY ! update soon

*screams, faints, and dies* I LOVE IT! PLEASE! You have to update soon please! This is amazing! I live how sarcastic prince is, and I love the way you tell the story, keeping it similar, but changing it slightly to make it yours. Its brilliant! Please update soon!

kyaaaa! this is awesome! especially since Cloud is so much smarter and powerful! and I just can't stop laughing about Sally! ahahahhaahahhhaahahahahah... please do update soon! and I guess that the Dictator of life will be Eric no? ahhaahhaha :) good luck!

I love this story! Please upload

Hahahaha so funny! I need more to read of this story!

Nice, awesome, amazing, and all sorts of other praises. I especially love that Mafia bit you included, that was absolutely wonderful. Although i do think they are a little stiff, with all the military-like words and actions coming out. I mean, they're Mafia, not an Army. And I was wondering who trained them like that? Prince? A little hard to swallow. But it was interesting to see how Prince dealt with it, and the bodyguard. It was also nice to finally see Ice Phoenix have her 'Sunshine'. I hope we can see more of the Mafia clans.

Also love the idea of Prince as Lolidragon's 'father'. Wu Qing, go for it! It does make me think, Prince, as Lolidragon's 'father'...Prince's as Odd Squad's 'father'. I mean, Prince was the one who set up Yulian and Wolf together, is a big brother/maybe-father figure to Doll, Lolidragon is already mentioned, Gui...is juz Gui. Prince is the leader of Odd Squad, the one everyone look to when in need, everyone trust ( somewhat, considering this Prince's lovely sadistic tendencies ), and I suppose the creator Odd Squad.

Wow, long review. I'm sorry for ranting, bad habit. I juz really love this so try that all sorts of ideas come to mind. Going to stop soon. Hope you update soon. Love this chapt too.

...Sally is awesome. xD And I feel bad for Ming. May Loli warm up to him. xD

Yun is now the father figure for all girls and the guys now ask him for permission to court the girls huh? Cool da!

My brain malfunctioned for a second when I read 'call me Sally'. I was like wait wait wait WHAT?! He's so strong and bulk, but he's actually really cute. I think he would be great for Ice Phoenix.
BTW, who are you gonna pair Prince with? Judging from his/her personality so far, it would be best to have someone who is always calm, collected, and maybe more powerful than Prince so they could keep him in check . Prince is no doubt very powerful and no one of power would go against him, so what would happen if Prince...say, decides to do something rash? In my opinion, Gui spoils Prince too much.