Please make more! I love everything about this story, especially how true it stays to Kirby lore.

Man I love your word choices. Very good job :3 But, the fight's getting boring as it's been going for about five chapters. Can you wrap it up? This is like the only good Fanfic I can find, sadly I can't post my own yet. Bummer, but wait until I'm 13! Like I said earlier, good job and keep up the good work.

Interesting as usual, and of course I'll let you know! It's basically about a Doomer named Lazik and how she deals with the events of Return To Dreamland. Also I have a suggestion. I noticed you use "!" a lot to show shock/suprise. I suggest using "...!" instead. It's the correct way. Anyways that's all. Bye for now :D

Good chapter. This Purple Zephyr guy sounds interesting. I have a story about the Sphere Doomers myself I want to post. Only problem is, I don't have an account. Darn! I'll try to get one by Christmas. Then I can follow this, yay! Anyways good job as usual, bye :D

Yay the story's getting better! I love Sparky already, she seems powerful. What monsters are Arbor and Oak? I picture them as Whispy Woods, haha I'm probably wrong. Here's some tips: Replace numbers with words like, "Would you listen to me for 1 second!?" Turn the 1 into one. And "what the hack", you mean what the heck right? Sphere Doomers are here! Or Sphere Robbers. I love thier theme :D Keep going! You update fast.

This my friend is a good story. Fanfiction needs more stories like this; all we get now is all anime-based and Meta Knight Meta Knight Meta Knight. Very nicely done, you put work into it I can tell. My only problem is you have a lot of mistakes so go over it once or twice after writing a chapter please! Like once you called Sora a "she". And how are Luna and Sora related? One has black hair, the other yellow? I feel your basing them both off of monsters but not telling us. May I make a suggestion? Is Magolor appearing in this story? If he doesn't, it would make a great twist, good or evil. Probably won't know that I reminded you though. XD Anyways, keep it up! I'll defiently keep reading :3

This seems a bit identical to the story I'm creating, like yours is Starpolis, and mine ends with polis.
Also, it has to do with finding new friends or partners, so as my story.
But the rest is disimilar.
As for one, I really cherish this story, so keep writing till you're finished, who knows? You'll might get many reviews! Just put a bit of BAZAM! You know? Like foreshadowings or plot twists. Maybe flashbacks or themes.

i agree with gaming good, there's a vaguel storyline but it intrigues the user to want to read more.
Please contine with this story.

Man, I surprised this story doesn't have more reviews. Well anyway, I really liked the concept of the Elemental Spheres. Infact, I had a similar concept in my fanfic, but they were called Power Orbs. This seems like it be a really great story. Keep on writing!

It's a good begining and I like the way your described the characters. This is a pretty good story.

It's certainly the shortest prologue I've read, but it makes me want to read more.