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| Reviews for Kim Stoppable Jr |
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   CrimsonPetal.lynn 10/26/12 . chapter 7Love it so far, wish they were a bit longer, but I'm fine with it. I can tell you have a great plot for it. Adding detail and imagery would help, and I'm absolutely in bliss 'cause you have dyslexia and writing this awesome fic. xD -Gives you a cookie- |
| CajunBear73 10/10/12 . chapter 6 Sounds like much of Kim, Sr.'s years are about to be reenacted in Kim, Jr.'s high school...LOL! CB73 |
| tazdeval 10/10/12 . chapter 5 you have something going here, but like im sure you already know your entire story is shorter than the average for one chapter on this site... you may want to go back and just add small things... describe what the character is feeling as they say things, give more descriptions of the facial expressions and surroundings. it will help you come out with longer chapters. |
| CajunBear73 10/9/12 . chapter 5 I wonder if this is the beginning of a crime team... LOL! CB73 |
| DrakkenandShegoLover1 10/9/12 . chapter 5 I really like we're this is going but I think you need to make chapter a lot longer and make them more detailed. Updating a 600-1200 word chapter once a week or every other week is Bette than updating every 2-4 days with a chapter being 100-300 words. You have a good idea here but I think you need to stretch it out |
| CajunBear73 10/8/12 . chapter 4 Hmm, so how did Drew come to have that bunch chasing him...? CB73 |
| Aliqueen16 10/7/12 . chapter 4 Hey Steven. It's me, Laura. Loved the whole story, but u should continue it. Maybe Kim Jr. Could date her * new friend * and he'd forget to get his revenge on the Stoppables. And there you have it. A plan down the drain and a Romeo & Juliet. What do u think? |
| CajunBear73 10/4/12 . chapter 3 Or would they? CB73 |
| Guest 9/11/12 . chapter 2 ooh continue |
| Guest 9/9/12 . chapter 1 Quite brief there. But I see Kim was in agreement with the name of their daughter. Ron must have gotten her to 'agree' when she was in either extreme pain or the drugs really kicked in? CB73 |
| CajunBear73 9/10/12 . chapter 2 Oh boy, here they go... CB73 |
