FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Black Metalmark 2008-08-20 ch 10,  | abuseOh my gosh, that was just about one of the best Misao/Soujiro stories out there! The emotions were played out almost perfectly. Except Aoshi was a bit out of character quite a few times but he's just a bit too hard to get in character some times. Aside from that I loved the slow development in this story that made it believable for Misao to fall out of love with Aoshi and with Soujiro. Nicely done! This is definitely a favorite. |
| alwaysNaruHina 2008-07-11 ch 10, | abuseWhat a beautiful story! I just love it! good job |
| jazzy 2007-12-24 ch 10, anon. | abusewow- that wuz pretty much the perfect ending- I feel so bad for aoshi, though- (I really am an aoshi fan) but oh well... also I realize that i've been reviewing a lot, and that this fic is really old, so probably i seem like a weirdo- I'm kinda sorry, but it wuz fun- usually I review after every chapter, but this fic wuz so good, i just wanted to read it- I luv it all- great fic- very nice and natural and not-to-rushed... peace out (just kiddin') see ya later (maybe) :D |
| jazzy 2007-12-24 ch 8, anon. | abusenice and natural way for misao and soujiro to fall in love- very sweet, nice and slow, not forced- luv it! They are perfect for each other- I'm kinda frustrated- in a good way- because I really think that they should be able to see that THEY WERE MADE FOR ONE ANOTHER- it's OK thought because it's natural that they should take time to fall 4 one another- this chappie was SUPERFABULOUSGREATINGENEOUS! :D |
| jazzy 2007-12-24 ch 4, anon. | abusewunderful! luv all that yumi/shishio hints... It makes sense that Misao would know the story... I like how sou/misao haven't yet fallen in love exactly, but they're becoming really good friends who understand each other- that's the basis of true love, righ? Anyway, you don't want to get me talkin' philosophy- I have some pretty random ideas... Luv the ficcie-wiccie- I'm gonna read more now! :D |
| jazzy 2007-12-24 ch 3, anon. | abusewow- I'm only on chappie three but I luv this ficcie! I especially luv how soujiro and misao are coming to understand each other- it's not just like 'oh, i can't have aoshi, so i guess u'll do'- u really delve into soujiro and misao's feelings- very nice- I'm gonna read more now! :D |
| moji 2007-12-20 ch 10, anon. | abuse'That's so sweet! this is the best story ever!'...that is exactly what i said when i finished this story. I am ur best reviewer because I a actually put a quote in my reveiw! |
| moji 2007-12-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseo! the plot thickens...sorry to repeat myself! |
| moji 2007-12-20 ch 7, anon. | abusethe plot thickens...I see a lovers' triangle...but maybe aoshi doesn't count as he doesn't love. |
| moji 2007-12-20 ch 5, anon. | abuse*sniff* ...KILL...EVIL...AOSHI... why is he such an awfully unfeeling person? *sniff* *sniff* *sniff* |
| moji 2007-12-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseI certainly respect your preference with the sou/mi pairing...but this vote doesn't really count cause I'm a sou/mi fan! LU 4ever! |
| moji 2007-12-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseo! i like this... |
| Anime's-mistress 2007-10-20 ch 10, | abuseThis story is just so sweet and wonderful. I can't help but feel bad for Aoshi though. You did a great job. C: |
| MimixTHExDeceitful 2007-09-04 ch 10, | abuseI LOVED IT! Lol. I did a search on google for misao and soujiro fanfics and this one popped up on geocites. But it wouldn't let me view chapter 10 so I desperately went to fanfiction and searched and almost died when I saw it pop-up! : D |
| donut 2007-04-20 ch 10, anon. | abusei fell in love with thos fic. you have great talent in writing and i wish you the best with the rest of it. kudos for you! |