itll be great if ramza become a dark or onion knight

Always feel sorry for Ovelia.

When suddenly, update! Review for you.

so much for quick update... gl

this truly is magnificent you sir wrote like a 'sir'

great story so far cant wait to see where you go with it and what changes update soon pls :-)

:3 Nice ending to the chapter.

Fun stuff. Mustadio is quite awkward.

Hi, I never thought that you let Miluda to live on, so she could fight along with Ramza.
I can say that your fic is good. Hmmm, I was wondering if Miluda met Wiegraf someday.
I'm sorry about my harsh review. I hope that your fic will be updated.

Good Chapter.

I think you've improved in the time skips
and writing.

'Like them'? My good fellow, what are you implying about my fair Alicia and Lavian? :P

Fun chapter... part of chapter. Whatever.

Looking forward to more.

SO Lavian and Alicia are lesbians if I was reading it right...so why were they needed? the birthday event?

Just read this all in one go. Looking forward to more.

Merry Christmas.

OH new chap! *reads* ah just a rewrite. hmm? *reads authernote* *smiles* friend i am nothing but a fool but i do not assume (nasty disgusting habit if you ask me) id rather be surprised by your creativity! so you spare agria's mooks and you mentioned rad...curious wish i had a witty or spaztastic comment for that but im just curious, what will you do with them i wonder...and i like your bit on what the holy knights leave behind on their skills corpses i always speculated(much MUCH different from assumption) that they just left behind charred corpeses, haha! still interesting additions i look forward to what they bring. as usual i enjoyed your writing, and hope you continue to do so, tis a treat to read. till then please take care.

good evening again my good miss/sir. another fine chapter has come up(beasting!) i got to say this was a really great and full chapter. i was surprised that you offed agrias' mooks, writers here usally keep them around to flush out the "unique units" i guess in this case they were used to show the badassness that is ol' gaf, on that note i like how you portrayed agrias reaction to it, that is very real life situation in any warzone, fantasy or RL, when the action starts you have little time to moarn, you see the death and keep on moving, FOR QUEEN IN COUNTRY! your battles are enjoyable as usual i like the back to back fighting with miluda and ramza pretty cool. i think you got ramza's battle personalty down very well, nice guy, but dammit does he bring the hurt.

on a more funderful note...hehehe, i LOVE the miluda and ramza interaction in the second half, i like the michevios(spl?) side you gave to miluda, and the situation you gave to ramza(poor ramza..HA!) as well as the interaction between them, had a grin on the whole time i read it. i almost thought that ramza would throw miluda on the bed and do tickle torture, the woman was allready in giggles why not finish her off but i like this ending too.

i dont know why you question your "random crack scenes", they are really REALLY good they build alot of character and they are delightful, or in some cases humanizing, look at the characters. got an idea go with it. till next time friend, hope to see more of your goodness soon, till then please take care