I like this, a lot more descriptive as the original, and love Brie's reaction to Fangface and Hunter. Also love Martin's explanation on why he's a human from a werewolf family.

I don't know what is more ironic...t he fact I am planning a rewrite of Twiggy's Origins giving the Fangface characters some screen time or the fact I was goign to make Twiggy/ Nightclaw run into the gang there. Wel I am off to do homework, the edit should be up today or tommorrow.