|Reviews for Peter's Lament|
| Xion 3/9/13 . chapter 1
not bad. Short. Need to give me a glimmer of something in Peter.
| IceKat9494 1/25/13 . chapter 1
wow, I really like this! i mean, you could have added a little more dimension to peter. its just... I was hoping for some thing that would make HIM the good guy. like, him wondering why he was so mean, stuff like that. Good story tho!
| Jiggy 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Ooooooooooooh! I hate Peter soooo much!
| DJMitsu 9/9/12 . chapter 1
First reader, first reviewer. Awww yeah. XD
Granted I haven't read the book, but this definately sounds like something to look into
You really should post more, you write well, and I can rest easy knowing your grammar is good.