|Reviews for League of Legends: Fall of the Great|
| Guest 4/8/13 . chapter 8
I really don't think Jarvan III would approve of his son marrying a half dragon.
Since he does have to produce a heir and what not.
In the most likely case Jarvans IV's marriage would be arranged
And probably to a noble of Demacia.
So theoretically isn't it more likely that he ends up with lux?
| Guest 3/14/13 . chapter 4
Try to spel a little bit better anyway funny story :D
| TheEpicJ 2/5/13 . chapter 9
Very good indeed but some lemons wouldn't be bad ;p
| pabuisperfect 1/25/13 . chapter 8
DJIAOWHAPE MORE PLS ODJPOWE
| Aksine 1/22/13 . chapter 8
Really good chapters (a few spelling mistakes here and there) ,but it would be better if each of the scenes were more descriptive and longer,but i know it's hard with so many characters in place ,And poor lux :(
| the epic j 1/7/13 . chapter 7
Epic story man like it sooo much !
| blob 1/6/13 . chapter 7
Poor, poor darius... pretty excited for the next chapter, couldnt help but notice all the references to a song of fire and ice series, you sly author you :)
| Aksine 1/1/13 . chapter 6
This gets more and more interesting ,keep it up,Darius and Vi would make a good pair, and congos on the less mistakes ,but not to point out you seem make spelling mistakes that are phonetical ,waiting for next chapter :)
| Aksine 12/29/12 . chapter 5
Really nice story,but has no central plot as such ,also a lot of grammatical errors (You can take the help of online thesaurus and word correctors )
| Golden Buddha 12/17/12 . chapter 3
This is a good story, but a lot of grammatical errors
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 3
It's really great that you have so many characters in your story. Keep it up!
| En Taro Adun Executor 11/28/12 . chapter 2
Awesome chapter, needs definite revisement over grammar and simple spelling mistakes. Other than that, this is a good story so far.
| Blob 9/9/12 . chapter 1
I always like these kind of fictions, however they always seem entirely noxus/DEMACIAAAA! based, it will be nice to see how some of the smaller nations (freljord, piltover etc.) handle the war