I really don't think Jarvan III would approve of his son marrying a half dragon.
Since he does have to produce a heir and what not.
In the most likely case Jarvans IV's marriage would be arranged
And probably to a noble of Demacia.
So theoretically isn't it more likely that he ends up with lux?
Just wondering.

Try to spel a little bit better anyway funny story :D

Very good indeed but some lemons wouldn't be bad ;p

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Really good chapters (a few spelling mistakes here and there) ,but it would be better if each of the scenes were more descriptive and longer,but i know it's hard with so many characters in place ,And poor lux :(

Epic story man like it sooo much !

Poor, poor darius... pretty excited for the next chapter, couldnt help but notice all the references to a song of fire and ice series, you sly author you :)

This gets more and more interesting ,keep it up,Darius and Vi would make a good pair, and congos on the less mistakes ,but not to point out you seem make spelling mistakes that are phonetical ,waiting for next chapter :)

Really nice story,but has no central plot as such ,also a lot of grammatical errors (You can take the help of online thesaurus and word correctors )

This is a good story, but a lot of grammatical errors

It's really great that you have so many characters in your story. Keep it up!

Awesome chapter, needs definite revisement over grammar and simple spelling mistakes. Other than that, this is a good story so far.

I always like these kind of fictions, however they always seem entirely noxus/DEMACIAAAA! based, it will be nice to see how some of the smaller nations (freljord, piltover etc.) handle the war