I only read the chapter one and its not my cup of tea. Really, if they tricked me like that i would kick there ass to kingdom come. And the fact that Gohan is stronger than each and everyone of them is so obvious its not even funny.

Not to mention the fact that telepathy doesnt work on Gohan or any zfighter because they are too well disciplined in the mind. Too well guarded and there is no way in hell Gohans mind would be that weak. And if it was, there is no way in hell he could use energy based attacks. For in doing so, you need a strong conviction and a great mind of will. Really, he could have just kept his mind clear and she cant pick up any thoughts on him.

Also, going back in time to recruited the greatest superhero in his time, they should be at his feet worshipping him. Especially since he has the power to destroy the world with a finger.

Really, im pissed that you got Gohan to bow down to them like they own him.

I think you made a mistake with the time. The 18th century happened 3 centuries ago. If this was one thousand years in the future, it would be the 31st century.

You've got a good story going here. Unique plot; been waiting for one of these. But I think you could slow things down a bit-from what I can see so far, things are moving a bit quickly.

Hmm, while the story is written well I'm not a fan of the idea. Harry, and the rest of the Z-Senshi, are simply far too powerfull as opposed to the ohers. If Frieza can already destroy a planet without a problem, imagine what soemone of Gohan's strength could do.

Damn what a good story! I love how you made the dialect on ChiChi and Goku, very southern and smart since they DO live in the mountains. The grammer and format is awesome, you can rarely find stories like this!

The argument between Goku and Gohan was so good! I was thinking "Oh my god, Gohan/Goku! Why would you say that!". The emotions were well written without writing a wall of text.

The fight scenes were also well writen so its easy to imagine whats happening. Being able to include all the Z-fighters in a story and writting them without being OOC is a feat you can very rarely see throughout the fanfiction world. This makes it feel like it actually goes hand in hand with the DBZ world.

I dont know a lot about DC characters and the Legion but this plot is so original and very well written. I looked at the published date and it says 02, I hope you dont give up on this!

This story needs to be put on a "Best Realistic DBZ Fanfiction" List. Keep It Up! This story deserves soo many more reviews!

PS: Thumbs up on not including GT. GT is noncanon and should never be included in a good fanfic like this.

this is the wrong red sun idea is silly not that i think your theory is that bad but if you think about it when Goku went to namek he used his Kamehameha and keioken times ten in order to escape a red sun and had he been weakened not only would the kaioken have killed him but also he wouldn't have been able to escape Gohan is many hundreds of thousands more powerful than his father at this point in time so even if and i mean if it did have some kind of effect on saiyans. Gohan is so powerful at this point only gohan would notice any drop in his energy he should still seem like he is indestructible . i like the idea that saiyans a weakness but just stealing off superman is not cool. why not try to explain it by some other means like a lack of immunity to any future space viruses or a new type of pollution in the future that messes up extraordinarily high chi?

good chapter, byes

I really like your story. Its a pity alot of people haven't given you reviews cause it is well written and actually has a pretty good plot mix. I personally hope you can continue. Oh and pay no attention to the flames I saw in your review's this is fanfiction people need to open their minds.

Kinda stupid. The legion is meesing up the past, and what was the point of them picking Gohan? Couldn't they find a damn super-hero in their own time? Oh, and as for the test, Gohan should have shown those three and beat the crap out of them by doing that cruel joke-test. Thinking that you ffailed hundreds of people and got them killed would have made me boil with rage but Gohan hardlky got mad and just forgave them anyways. Oh, and if gohan can read kis, then why didn't hwe know that there were no ppl on board that plane? Bah, not my kind of story.

Liked reading this new chapter of yours and I especially liked how you linked Gohan's earlier adventures with the New Mutants. I xan't wait to read what happens next. Please continue; write more very soon.

Liked this new chapter of your story. please continue; write more very soon.

I love the opening. That scean with Brawn was just comical.

Their was a little confusion that took some re reading to understand. mainly in two different places. The pod coming down and the saving of the faris wheel.

i personally do not know the origional storie that you based this on so i can't help nor care about any liberities you may have taken.

Good chapter.

ST1

oh wait, thats right DBZ has a different timeline. my bad

um 1774 was over 200 years ago.

this makes no sense to me

I love the story, except that Pan doesn't say'Like' all the time. It makes her sound like a ditz, please fix that in your next chapter. Other than that, I really look forward to the rest of the story!