Please update "This Kiss"

Please update "This Kiss"

Good story.I hope you think about writing a sequel to this you do I'd love to read .

I liked, especialy the neat little twist you put on that clieche. And riots are horrible.

Great fic! I really like them as brothers, it works. Um...this isn't the best place to ask, but please get to work on "Wings over Earth". I really, really need more of that fic!

Hey! This is an original story! I never thought about Duo being Heero's twin... Well, I've imagine a twin for Heero, but this is a good idea too. I really wish you could do another part.

You know what? When I started watching Gundam Wing, I confused Duo with Heero! XD Lol, anyway, great story!

LOL I kinda saw that coming, but still funny. Nice!

I LOVED IT IT WAS SOOOOOOOO FUNNY AND WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH WINGS OVER EARTH I'LL BE CHECKING EVERYDAY AND WRITING MORE REMINDERS IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON OTHER WRITERS IN ESCAFLOWNE KNOW HOW PERSISTANT I CAN BE SO HURRY UP ALREADY!

I liked that. I read one other thig whee Duo and heero found out they were brothers. I like that a lot more than them as a couple. ANyway, this was nice. Good job. It was funny, but serious at the right times. I especially liked when Quatre called them best friends and they both yelled at him. For some strange reason I also like it when Heero came through the window. The way you described it I could really picture the scene. Its also one of the few scene I've read with heero smiling that actually work. Anyway I'm babbling now, good bye. Please write more on Wings Over Earth; I'm dying waiting for it.

this is so cool! totally original. they DO kind of look alike now that i think about it. wow. i LOVED it!

not 'zactly humor, Cyberworlf-san...but who's complaining? I know I'm not! _ Good job! Gonna read some of ur other stuff now...

oh my gosh that was sooo cool. i loved it. i havent read the other reviews yet but i bet 1x2 fans HATED it :). i loved it though...did i say that already?

hehehehehe...That was cute! ;) I

Wow, EXCELLENT fanfic! It wasn't really humor, but it was REALLY good! Keep up the great work!