That... Was... AMAZING! It was BEAUTIFUL! I love how you brought ALL the ships together, well almost all at least. You are a really good writer, and I'm a big fan, in case you didn't notice. Seriously, you're really awesome Megan.

TheFanFicCritic

This is a good first fan fic. There are some things that I personally think should have been worded better but other than that I love how you've added rocketshipping and wishfulshipping.

That was good! You should make a sequel!

For your 1st fanfic, it wasn't bad at all. Pretty good! :)
Just surprised James acted coldly to Jessie, at first! So unlike him! o.o
But I can understand though, I mean being the loner and all. So sad, but love how Jessie stood up for him. And lol, I can so NOT imagine her and the twerps friends! So weird for me! XD

Just a disclaimer-

I DON'T OWN POKEMON.

If I did, these people would soooooo be couples right now.

Not bad, not bad at all. There were a few grammar errors but all in all it was good.