Dang that was really good...

I read this a long time ago and I was so happy to find it again.

I really think you did a good job on this poem. And the way you portrayed Vegeta is perfect.

Thanks for writing such a great poem.

Later, Raven.

This is good. This is very good. Everything about it is just right.

I liked "Blood Brothers" too.

That's...different. Very much so. Its quite introspective, but I liked it. And I especially liked the last lines. As the Queen of Poems With Bitchin' Last Lines I hearby knight you. You can now call yourself Sir Nate Gray, Knight of Poems With Bitchin' Last Lines. ::nods mock-seriously:: You're the first person to receive this honor. ::holding up a little green and red round pin with a sticker covering whatever the original image was, the sticker saying "K.O.P.W.B.L.L.", and drops it into his review box:: Please write more poems, your take on Vegita is refreshing and interesting. And you know...I'm still giggling at the Cherry Pie fic...

Wow...

Wow! Very deep! Good work!

That is so deep.

So sue me, it's all I got. It's hard to review a poem. (10)

Oh my god..Such beauty, such angst. It's true.. All of it. This is probably, or should I say most definately what is lying under Vegeta's cold exterior. His feelings of hate and shame toward the unjustices that Freeza did to him. I am such a fan of the Fics about Vegeta and his life under Freeza..and this poem was one of the best manifestations of his true feelings.. one of the best interpretations. I loved it. Write more in the future, you have a true gift.

A good and (I believe) an accurate poem.

Great! I have never read anything like this, and it is awesome. Keep Writing, Please!

Bravo! BRAVO! I loved it. Please write more *puppy dog eyes* PLEASE?

Gripping

That was good. It describes a side of the jerk that we all know and love, that is hidden.