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   dcp1992 5/2/13 . chapter 8Great chapter! Deffently short, but pretty good. Update soon! |
| XxSeiko-ChanXx 5/2/13 . chapter 8 Konichiwa! This story is great! I love every single detail! Only complaint is short chapters! Now to deal with that supposedly sweetheart chick. *Cracks knuckles* Look and listen here you poker face ninny. If your a*ss hates alternate universe, why read? Matter of fact...why be on Fan Fiction? More than half of the stories on here are AU! Secondly you have no right to insult, especially if you can't spell your insults correctly. Two...ever tried writing your own story? Nope. Lastly stop being a pansy, hiding behind an anon/unregistered username. Some of you anon/unregistered reviewers are afraid to get PMed, by the authors. Smh. -Eats cookiez- Oh yes I spelled it with a Z. Seiko-Chan Good luck with the pregnancy D. Amethyst :) Oh yeah the bad-mouthing was for "sweetheart" |
| Al Capone 4/26/13 . chapter 1 Wow... Looks like Sweetheart2 isn't such a sweetheart after all. Even though the story isn't that good or hard to find likable, there is no need to be so hurtful and cruel. I apologize to you on behalf of Sweetheart2. A review about a story is not meant to be use to insult and make personal offenses. As for the story, add a little pizzazz and creativity to interest readers, but make sure you somewhat stay true to the original "Avatar: the Last Airbender. If you can find your own creativity, do some research on the lore use to inspire the "Avatar" universe or look in the world and media for inspiration. For example, I think the disguises for the character's alter ego could've been better. I think the hooded cloaks of the assassins from the video game series "Assassin's Creed" adapted to asian cultures along with some cloth masks would've made great disguises. And the characters have to stay somewhat true the the originals. Once again, I apologize on behalf of Sweetheart2's offenses and hope that it doesn't stop you from writing. Maybe you can do better with the next story. Or you could even rewrite this one and make it better. Ask for suggestions from your readers. |
| Sweetheart2 4/5/13 . chapter 7 Ummm. Like this is totally not good. I HATe alternate universes. I hate you two. There is no creativity. It is bowing. HORRIBLe! |
| child who is cool 4/5/13 . chapter 7 great chapter |
| MakorraKataangShipper 3/12/13 . chapter 7 Please please pleaseeee continue soon! I want to know how the story goes further :) |
| avatarfan 12/31/12 . chapter 7 Brilliant. Amazing. Please update soon. you're an amazing writer btw :D |
| BadassNerd 12/21/12 . chapter 7 One of the most amazing story i ever heard! Update;) |
| dcp1992 12/20/12 . chapter 7 Great chapter! Glad Katara is going back with the gang, but wonder what happened and the end. Update soon! |
| Avatar Gita 12/19/12 . chapter 7 Great you updated! Nice chapter! but really this cliffhanger is horrible... |
| Kataanglover138 12/19/12 . chapter 7 Please update soon :) |
| epiccupcakeisEPIC 12/19/12 . chapter 7 Great story! I need the next chapter asap! |
| Eddie Donovan 11/30/12 . chapter 1 This should be interesting... Katara seems bad-ass and scary in this bloody story. Keep on writing my friend. Cheerio |
| Karlita 11/30/12 . chapter 5 Lan makes me sick! Will we be seeing her later in the future? Good chap! |
| Jason 11/30/12 . chapter 6 Seriously dude! You punish us non-stop with the cliff-hangers! Hey Jade's One of a Kind you can leave me a review if you like. *Wink* |
