i was sad but now it's okay ) what did the other woman said to arizona?! grrr

Great !

hope that they will get better !

Update Soon. Love where this story.

hope she will find arizona !

continue pls dont listen to them if they dont like them and dont understand then dont read them right? why bother but some of it doesn't make sense honestly but you can improve.. so for all of you... you can suck it bitches lol...

oh my god ! no she didn't o

oh my god no ! o

hope they can help each other )

Omg, I'm so excited for the next chapter! I lover every single part. Why is Arizona so sad, why did she start crying? I WANNA KNOW! I love this fanfic, never stop writting it. I also loved the way callie thoughs run in her head, you describe her confusion very well.

Can't wait to see Callie and Arizona build on their friendship and help each other.

Honestly and without being rude. You need to find a beta if you are thinking of continuing. The grammar is unfortunately really awful making it basically unable to read. It did not make much sense to me because I couldn't get past the grammar. The character's were off.

EG. Callie asking Alex for a divorce...with a smile on her face and the way she asked - It just read all wrong.

Using certain phrases...Like Gold Boy to describe Mark...I see where you're going with that...but it's not Gold Boy, it's Golden Boy.

I'm assuming English isn't your first language so getting a Beta to help with Grammar and Spelling and punctuation would be your best bet then add in an actual summary and flesh out your plot a bit more with where you want to go then you should be fine. I applaud your efforts but honestly this site is full of trolls and bullies and IMO your story is a prime target for people to pick on you..It needs a lot of work but I'm sure you will be able to do it.

Don't continue