|Reviews for Beyond Inappropriate|
| pauleen 6/8/13 . chapter 62
At the beginning the story i assumed Carlisle ran of with some young chick. But i slowly learned it was eith Charlie. At least they kept it close to the family. Poor Esme and Bella. I stil feel a loss for what could have been for these two. Tears...
| pauleen 6/8/13 . chapter 59
Eve though these two maybe able to find their happy ending apart. I am mourning what they could have had. Yes it would have robbed Edward of a decent family and possibly ruin this present one. Still my heart wants what it wants. And bravo to you fir making feel this way. Very powerful writing and feelings has been evoked in me.
| pauleen 6/8/13 . chapter 53
So these two plan on moving on after the holiday season. If I were in that situation, I don't believe I could give up Edward and be like it will be okay to see him love and in love with someone else and have a family. My heart will be invested. I guess these two are different.
| pauleen 6/8/13 . chapter 51
I was just wondering if they both get a happy ending with each other or with other people. They care deeply for one another, more than just close family friends, motherly and kindly friends.
| pauleen 6/8/13 . chapter 49
This story has my heart rate on high. I can feel the numerous friendships, relationships and love between all in that house and how easy could be destroyed with one wrong move from these two.
I like the different pairing dynamics. Edward and James are brothers. Alice and Jasper are bro and sis. Esme and Bella are tjeir moms and Charlie ran off with his gay lover. And Carlisle a cheater. My kind of Story. Taking me out of my twific comfort.
Keep up the good work.
| pauleen 6/7/13 . chapter 22
I have been meaning to review on the other chapters but i wanted to be sure of my thoughts on Bizzy. I think she is underhandedly trying to find out if and when Edward's with another girl. She tells herself she has no right to care and he can do whatever because what they have has no future. But I see the potential for jealousy and broken heart. So far I am enjoying this story? This is a different style of jrabble.
| pauleen 6/6/13 . chapter 5
It's sad to know her husband neglected her that way and she feels guilty or something she didnt know she was a part of.
| pauleen 6/6/13 . chapter 1
This story can easily become one of my favorites. That was such a good roller coaster ride.
| pauleen 6/6/13 . chapter 2
I am liking this very well, and its funny too.
| Sharon 6/2/13 . chapter 65
Didn't think I'd like but I did but the sex was not detaild enough
| mimi 5/25/13 . chapter 65
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! okay, so i didn't really believe edward and bella would have an easy time being together with the age difference but I can't believe that they really didn't end up together.
it's a really beautiful story though!
| D 171 5/25/13 . chapter 65
I cried, a lot.
Okay I found this chapter heartbreaking.
My heart not in agreement with how this turned out.
I realise big hurdles to face, especially with the family, but
LOVE CONQUERS ALL.
They could have worked it all.
I'm an incurable romantic for everything in life.
Thanks for sharing.
| D 171 5/25/13 . chapter 60
Is there really no hope for them to be together?
| D 171 5/25/13 . chapter 56
Nice little trip .
| D 171 5/25/13 . chapter 54
Don't want this to be over for them.
I have a bad feeling.