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| Reviews for Edge of Truth |
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   Sentinel07 5/7/13 . chapter 34Keep up the good work. Good job. |
| splitheart1120 5/6/13 . chapter 34 I wonder if Yggdrasil suspects Lloyd of having ulterior motives... |
| Shiary 5/6/13 . chapter 34 nice chapter poor lloyd as a kid though but you wrote exactly how most kids who are abused think. I liked it and I cant wait for next chapter |
| Breezyfeather 5/6/13 . chapter 34 Yay updates! Can't wait for next Monday! Good luck on finals :) |
| Guest 4/29/13 . chapter 24 To be honest I'm kind of confused. Pronyma mentions that the adopted son of Yggdrasill's name is Lloyd in Chapter 10, yet in this chapter Zelos is wondering about Lloyd's father. Is this a mistake or will this be explained later? Anyway, I am enjoying this fanfic and look forward to future chapters. |
| knownobody 4/29/13 . chapter 33 Ah, was yugi having lloyd followed the entire time? or did some of the desians send word of lloyd's visit? hmmm what will happen when yugi finds out colette is alive... and with the assassin to boot! deffinatly one of the best chapters, please keep up the amazing work! |
| splitheart1120 4/29/13 . chapter 33 Why would Mithos come here? Did someone tell on Kvar? |
| Shiary 4/29/13 . chapter 33 O_O that means trouble. |
| splitheart1120 4/23/13 . chapter 32 And the conspiracies only meld deeper... |
| Shiary 4/23/13 . chapter 32 the beginning of the chapter and what happened to Raine seem odly out of character for the Desians. They consider humans to be below them and worthless. Otherwise its an ok chapter. |
| terracannon876 4/23/13 . chapter 32 ...Wow. Where to start. I like the subtle implication of what happened to Raine rather than ... you know, yell it out. It helps my filters out, too (haha), but it ... is a sensitive issue and beating it over the head with a hammer just makes it ... tasteless writing-wise. I love how everything's coming together (and everyone seems to be a hostage for someone else!) Usually I'd be like "bah, you're going back to canon parties now," but now even if that did happen, it would be different because of everyone's different backgrounds and experiences and guilts and emotions. Thank you for everyone being alive though. There was one fic where some people died and I was like NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ._.; *ashamed I can't wait to read more! Thank you for this chapter |
| Makorra 4/18/13 . chapter 31 Okay so it took me me about two weeks before I started reading your newest updates but managed to read it all the way while in a train. First, wow so many plot twists I can't- it's very very interresting and it seems Raine's alive! Guess it means Collete's alive as well. It's just a feeling xD anyway cant wait for your next update! |
| Shiary 4/17/13 . chapter 31 ouch poor Zelos, Kratos is not a good companion |
| knownobody 4/16/13 . chapter 31 wow, I just don't know what to say... it was just so... so... unimaginably tense and beautifully done at the same time, the shroud of suspense and mystery that you cast upon these chapters is amazing and leaves me both dumbfounded and full of even more questions... where is sheena? whose leading the renegades? if raine is alive, then what about colette? what happened to everyone in sybak after judgement? why was genis trying to keep lloyd from taking back his swords? and how will kratos fend off the angels and pronyma/rodyle? arrrrg! please keeep up the good work! |
| Sentinel07 4/16/13 . chapter 31 No! First Colette and now Sheena? Hey Lloyd and Zelos, you gotta go find your ladies! Good chapter again. |
