Dramatical turn of the story and a cliffhanger of some sorts! Will they arrive in Denver in time? What about those monster? Will they alarm police to get him when arriving in Denver? Can't wait to read more of this!

I HATE THAT MAN!
Good work with this chapter!

Aisha

Panic and angst tortured Katie and made her dash to the wood, - the place of the scaring event. Shouldn't she seek shelter in the house where she was mit people who could protect her?
Can't wait to read more of this!
Maria

Great storyline and great writing of those dramatical occurrences. You master the art of enthralling your readers. Can't wait to read more of this!

This is really exciting! I'm eager to find out what happened to Molly - if she really was taken in by those people, or if the man perhaps lied and forged that letter concerning her whereabouts. He's a major creep, haha. Hope nothing bad happens to Katie.

What dramatical turn of life, Katie knowing about that brave behaviour of her parents. Will it have to do with their early death? Can't wait to learn more about this.
Maria