This is incredible! You are my lifesaver and please don't stop writing! And I really appreciate any and all kyle and amanda mush. This really feels like a continuation of the series. I can h heart their voice saying the lines practically. Thank you thank you thank you thank you!

This is spectacular! I loved Kyle XY, and you're doing a fantastic job of continuing the story! I look forward to reading more.
By the way, for some of he things that Jessi says, I am blown away. The stuff about Jackie's plant project and the pancake thing... Awesome!

brilliant, i really missed the series and this feels as if i were watching it as i read.

Love to hear the older story references. It shows that you truly want this to be an extension of the original plot.

Do you know programming? I noticed the reference to recursion, a practice I tend to avoid when possible.

Love your story-telling style.

Well, you've got the characters down pretty well. Good work. Also, impressive vocabulary.

How does Latnok KNOW that Kyle and Jessie were responsible for the failed experiment? I'm sure they have ample reasons to suspect, but they couldn't know. Why would Kyle admit it?

A good start so far. Certainly one of the better season 4s. Just remember to start a new paragraph for each character's dialogue and it would be nice to see a little more detail outside of 'he said then she said'. Keep up the good work!

This is really good, i'm starting to get a feel for the style, very similar feel as the actual tv show, which is good

Finished watching Kyle XY on Lovefilm, could not accept that was it, spent last 2 hours watching youtube videos and search the net, i have read some fan fics before when Terminator tv show ended, and your fan fic of kyle XY stood out to me, i hope you can help me feel that it wasnt all for nothing, it looks good so far, i just alittle unsure how it will go, now cassidy knows kyle is up to something and wants to stop the clonning, which is what they want, i feel that it surely be easily to get rid of kyle, or atleast thats what grace would probably be thinking.

that was awesome very

I really hope you continue this story is really great I love we are latnok please I know it's not over.

You have mentioned the story is complete. Does that mean episode 1 is complete? I like your story over all. The plot is great. I hope you continue your story. I didn't get the point where Amanda and Nicole are like unethical and all. But I agree with that she was in more danger by not knowing the truth but I guess there was no need for her to be that mad or saying "how I can know you are performing some brain surgery while walking with you".

I always wondered did Zyzyx/Latnok consider Jessi a failed experiment or Kyle? After all, they thought of terminating Kyle not Jessi when he took control of the situation. You mentioned that point, which makes sense.