Great start so far. I really like that this is in a first person POV, it provides a more interesting & unique perspective. Can't wait to find out who Melissa really is!

Seems like a really cool concept so far. Its nice to see someone else writing a longer ClueFinders facfic. I am really interested to see were this story goes. Also I like the little details about how the everyone has changed since the games left off. Hope you update soon.

I'm liking it so far. I think it's cool that you decided to bring Malicia back, and I think you were the first person on the site to reference the ClueFinders Reading Adventures? Well, I'm actually not sure. Good job, though!

I like how the characters are still friends after all this time :) Good job