I want Lucy to find her lover again - who cares about silly Caspian, who was bewitched by beauty at first sight (i.e. thinking with one organ instead of the other)?

OOOohhh. Well, Hug! I hope she meets him again in the end - and I mean literally the end, when they're all in the Real Narnia.

Oh, Dearest you simply must update! You will won't you? For me? As long as I label this as being your hundredth review it counts right? Yes? All your lovely reders concur. Update darling, all right? - Grace and Peace to you through our Lord Jesus Christ, Amen. -NarniaNerd

"These days, her body seemed to have a quite different scale of what could make her heart beat faster." - lovely concept!
"She wasn't about to try to argue a Wiggle out of his woes." :D Very wise!
Lucy's quite a bit taller than Reep, surely?
I like the names of the swords - will we have stories to explain them, sometime?
"Oh, Lucy was always his favorite,"... :(
Oh, Eustace! :D "soggy about it"... I really LIKE Eustace!
and poor Lucy! she is really struggling here! I hope she fights her way through to resolution soon. :)
A lovely continuation of your voyage!

You've written a beautiful story here! My only qualm is that Lucy is still, physically, very young- I think you should eleven? I think you explained it by saying she returned to how she once was because of Aslan's breath, which made sense, but it's still a little bit of a sticking point for me. Otherwise, your story is absolutely lovely! Your characterization is fantastic, and I love the dynamics between all of them. Eustace, by the way, is hysterical! Thanks for a great read.

Oh, this story is amazing! And I love the little verses spattered here and there throughout. Lucy's rendition of Sleeping Beauty was fairly amazing too, and Caspian's add in comments were funny. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey, great story so far, honestly I love it. I cannot wait formore, keep it up and have fun, bye,
-Becky

OMG Thank you so much for updating! I loved it! It was so sweet, I love the fact Eustace was meddling without even realsing it! Aww blees him!

I love your story please update soon?:)

This is such a good story! Your writing style is beautiful. I truly wish that you will update soon.

This is an amazing chapter ! :)
I really like how you stage Edmund here, he's been one of my favorite's anyway and he's really kind of cool there.
And all the jokes about dragons and Eustace are really funny.
It amuses me to see how you made the others jealous of Lucy for her closeness with Aslan - but who wouldn't be ?
The last romantic bit is really nice as well - I kind of wanted them to kiss at that point but on the other hand the wait makes their realtion more "special".

Oooooooooo, so yummy. Loved the dragon bits. And the dream...perhaps I'll have some of my own.

Haha. I seem to recall the conversation being more along the lines of me hijacking your story with off-topic DRAGONS DRAGONS DRAGONS.

I keep coming back to Lucy's line about how it takes less to make her heart beat faster. All through this, there's an achingly beautiful picture of a girl who was once a woman and is now very much a girl again, not just physically but also to an extent mentally and emotionally.

I don't know how I missed before that Drizzlegrim was a preexisting character.

POETRY. It seems very Lucy to me, to have a song on her head but realize she'd traumatize the poor Rhoop if she sang it out loud. XD.

DRAGONS DRAGONS DRAGONS ALSO IDIOT EUSTACE ALSO CARING EDMUND.

And poor Caspian.

Beautiful chapter, as always! This was worth the wait! I really want them to kiss now but I am sure that when/if that happens it too will be well worth the wait! Update soon!

That was the best thing ever. Not even kidding.

This is amazing and so very, very sad. "But I want our story to be legend, Lucy." You ever so delicately write of the idealistic Caspian who really does not quite get what is going to happen. He has very much tempted Aslan and that will not end well. "Surely he knows your heart, and would not deny you its deepest wishes."

This is just a gorgeous chapter, from her waking up, to the gentle tending of Rhoop, to the awesome, awesome swordplay and Lucy getting the upper hand. That part is very, very strong and well written and you can just feel Lucy's fighting and all the UST with Caspian.

You write her see-sawing emotions and attraction so well - your style of writing is so visual we can feel and taste the sensations of which you write. Special kudos for the delicate way you describe their growing attraction. You've done that so very, very well.

The backstory on the dragons featuring snarky Edmund and Chrys is great. Edmund is so in character and analytical about Draco Narnia (LOVE the name).

The final scene between them is so sad because of course we know what they do not - the end is coming and Lucy shall get her heart broken again. The longing is just beautiful and I feel so badly for them for this is definitely not a fairy tale with a happy ending.

Thanks for this awesome update.