Flashback containing chapters are awsome! I've also read the prequel to this and have 0.0001% criticism. Not only are Reconstructing Humanity and One Big Aperture Science Family very well written and fun but they are also unique. The 'Aperture Science Travel-Sized Trans-dimensional Storage Carrier, Ladies Edition in white suede' is something anyone would love to have, great idea btw. I hope you continue this story and so do everyone else!

awesome update so far :) hope everything works out with Wheatley

please update soon the wait is killing me...

I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS ROBOT WHEATLEY I KNEW IT!

I always love the flashback chapters. I believe flashbacks are where your writing talents shine brightest. :)

I loved this chapter! I was wondering when you were going to devote a bit more time to developing Robo-Wheatley, but now I see that the time spent was spent well! XD

...Wheatley's memory-dreams actually make me kind of sad. A good sad, though. You write them very well.

It's curious that Chelley is now sharing Wheatley's dreams...

Are they going to name their son "Harvey"?

Also, it's cute how attached GLaDOS is getting to the family, even though she tries to deny it.

Nice work! I look forward to more!

-Catflower Queen

:)

Robo-Wheatley is very creepy. But I suppose it fits for him. I still like the turret dog, and I'm glad that GLaDOS is finding it easier to integrate into the family.

I wonder what Robo-Wheatley will do when he finds out that Lillian is pregnant...

Great work! I look forward to more!

-Catflower Queen

So Wheatley and Lil will be having a boy? I'd be interested in seeing how that would pan out! XD

I have a feeling that Robo-Wheatley Symbolizes Wheatleys Dark self

i now get to murder myself waiting for the next chapter. woop-dee-freakin-doo

Emotion from GLaDOS? I like where this is heading! XD

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and I kinda like how Wheatley is still having issues with his past. I've always loved the flashbacks, lol

Hm... do I smell some passionate RatDOS in the future, or is it just Wheatley's barbecue from the first chapter? I mean, the Maniac DOES warm her lubricants up... [giggle]

Awesome writing as always, Luna. You know how to keep us readers craving for more chapters. Happy holidays and keep up the great work.

The turret dog was hilarious! And it seems as thought Chelley has inherited her grandmother's tendancy to cause trouble... even if she did so inadvertently.

I feel sorry for the gardening core. And I'll be interested to see everyone's reaction to Robo-Wheatley...

Looking forward to more!

-Catflower Queen