Wow. This is amazing, PUH-LEASE say you'll write more?! I was seriously thinking that there was gunna be an unhappy ending, for example, when mac kidnapped heidi and they were in the cave, and he lay on top of her and held her down ect, i thought it was like an unwritten 'rape' and, i was expecting there to be an unhappy turn of events at the end where heidi finds out she's pregnant... then realises it's mac's :O hahaha i guess that'd be a bit too far fetched, otherwise this was awesome! Please keep writing :D

Excellent story. I always thought of Mack as being on of the good guys.
Either way, I love reading this.

I'm loving this story i can't wait for the next chapter. hope dean and heidi will be okay

great chapter my eyes started to fill up wih tears when jordan was giving his wee speech :)

AWESOME love it

Sneaky Mac! What has he got planned?!
Hope to see you on the forum - I'm the admin there.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Again amazing, I feel soo sad that Heidi is blaming herself for this

Ooh I love the second chapter, Im already starting to think what might have happened to Jordan. There is another website you can post on that heaps of people do, search rescue special ops forum just sign up, wait to be accepted and activated and post away, really good site

I'm loving this! I thought I reviewed the first chapter, but forget to press 'POST'. Silly me :s

I hardly think this is the end of Heidi's troubles - I wonder where things will lead her.

I rarely have thought of Mac in this way, but this raging style seems to also suit :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

please update soon :)

Amazing writing for your first rescue fan fiction, i love the story and I'm excited to see another chapter