|Reviews for L'Effet Papillon|
| K-Tamura 6/13/13 . chapter 12
Ah... Fuuka is saved. Glad to see was safe during the ordeal.
Also, brrr... Mitsuru was cold; I understand her dilemma when a student was in trouble, added, it was kind a cute to Minato thinking about Yukari and that the OC characters in SEES sounded rather strong and were willing to continue to fight even though they were not powerful enough.
Lastly, I saw the picture of Kanzeon on Dev; She's a lot elegant than I thought, but besides that, you were spot on. And I'm tempted to see what Phil has in stored for an intervention
Well, Bye and have fun
| MewStar0013 6/13/13 . chapter 12
Yes! Fuuka was found! Totally expected since I played the game, haha :D Excellent work on this chapter! It was pretty cool that the Guard came in and almost stopped SEES, huh? They're are sort of like Strega then, but with a better purpose, I'm sure :) Man, this just makes me excited for the next chapter! I can only imagine what goes on next! I look forward to more and I really did love the artwork on DeviantART. You drew everyone so well! I'm so proud! _
This is me saying, Peace!
| Demons Anarchy 6/12/13 . chapter 12
When something like this happens, you know Strega will intervene with Phil's group. Makes you wonder if they'll end up helping S.E.E.S near the end to prevent the fall. Actually, how does Phil's group even know about that? Questions Questions!
Anyway, update soon!
| Draven22 6/12/13 . chapter 12
YAY FUUKA IS ON THE TEAM X3 but now i'm curious as to how phill and them know whats going on with the kirijo group's secrets...they have to have inside information is my only thought...anyway, yay more happy fluff! and aww...closer to death...meh theres gonna be a happy chapter next so suck it up phil
| Happy-the-Nekomander 6/12/13 . chapter 12
Ohh Shiori didn't get to rfight but i understand. Still wish she would have hit Akio with the book though. Anyways, S.E.E.S now know that Mitsuru knows something and is keeping of a secret, interesting. I'll go see the work on DA soon so can't wait for both the chapter and full body art from you Kapitan!
| Sayuko25 6/12/13 . chapter 12
Wow, poor Phil and Sasaki. They didn't even get the chance to confront SEES properly, but they've definitely established themselves as a threat now. Mitsuru and Akihiko will be bound to worry over just what it is they know, since they're still trying to keep it from Minato and the others.
I thought it was a pretty cool idea to have both groups go after Fuuka, and for the gym key to be already gone when SEES arrived. It fitted into the full moon scenario pretty naturally and it's good to see the two groups come face to face. The promise of 'forceful action' is ominous. I wonder what Phil has planned?
A change of pace in the next chapter sounds fun!
| SuperNova23 6/12/13 . chapter 12
When Minato described Ami with the shotgun, I imagined her fitting in a Persona x Resident Evil thing. And I'm sure she just doesn't feel in her shoulder anymore.
Great chapter, well worth the wait. It was interesting to see the brief exchange, but I have next time won't be so easy, especially since it's when Strega picks up S.E.E.S.'s movements as well.
| MewStar0013 6/8/13 . chapter 11
Ah! I gotta see your artwork! I bet it'll be awesome! Shinjiro is, as always, a badass, and you wrote his confrontation sce quite nicely! Not to mention that all the other characters flew into the balance of the story, too! Awesome And Shuya, awwww He's so adorable :3 Keep up the good work! I look forward to more :)
This is me saying, Peace!
| K-Tamura 6/7/13 . chapter 11
This is the most enjoyable chapter I ever read. I sometimes feel sorry for Yukari where it comes to Minanto. Plus, the interactions within the Other group is very natural; However, I just wondered how did they get together in the first place; what do they have against with the Kirijo group; how did they awaken their persona's and how did they know about the shadows in the first place?
Added, it seems that the inevitable is coming; I'm going be excited for the next chapter
Lastly, It would be interesting to see how you perceived Kanzeon; Even though I have my own perception of her, I would enjoy looking at your drawing
| Demons Anarchy 6/7/13 . chapter 11
I've been having fun by blasting away at Bleach: Soul Resurreccion, and I am WAY too killtrigger happy. Anyway, I already know where this is going to go... And it ain't good at all...
Update soon senpai!
| DeathOverLord 6/7/13 . chapter 11
Gahahahaha! Love it!
I cant wait to see your drawing! It's gotta be awesome!
| Sayuko25 6/7/13 . chapter 11
After coming home to a mountain of spam in my email inbox, seeing an alert that this fic had been updated was just what I needed after a long flight! I missed the internet way too much.
I loved how Yukari was the only one who was really into the whole ghost investigation thing. Everyone else was just kind of pulled into it, haha. Poor Junpei though, getting punched in the stomach like that, I dread to think what would've happened to Yoshi and Minato if Shinji hadn't shown up.
Looks like Phil and the others handled their field investigation thing a little differently than SEES did (understatement), but I wonder what's going to happen now that they've been seen in the mall? Nothing good can come of this!
And I seriously can't wait to see your drawings! I'm always so excited when people draw my OCs and I love seeing them in other people's styles. Good luck with those! :D
| Happy-the-Nekomander 6/7/13 . chapter 11
...omg, reading this makes me realise how short I made Shiori...and now you have a sketch of the two siblings!? How- never mind, as expected from you Kapitan. Anyways, back to the subject of chapter, next is when Fuuka appears. Can you make it so that she knows of Shiori's condition because they go to the same hospital?
Cant wait for the next chapter Kapitan, surprise us more!
| Draven22 6/7/13 . chapter 11
yay fuuka saving is next though i had no iea we ha to draw our characters...is that optional again or was it needed...also umm...still really curious as to who is getting cut from the story
| Mzr90 6/6/13 . chapter 11
All around cool chapter and looks like its all about to go down next chapter. Also like the little mention of Kiritsugu. Idk if you'll give him a bigger role or not but I'm looking forward to it.