I would say evil. Pure evil.
Like the story too.

The name is "Laurie", not Lori.
And I wonder she is a betrayal?! NO NO NO D:

First would be Hitler, the Kim Jong il, Darth Vader, and can't say on the last one

Okay, so I read it. I will still read it. I do'nt know why I was so stubborn and didn't read it. It's good. :)

I liked the chapter, and who is this mysterious boy, hmm? Is he like his daddy, cuz I would like that.

Aw, pure little 6th graders! You tainted them! Shame on you!

I hope I wasn't the only one confused...

Of course Hobbits are real , they control the gold markets .

Nice visuals. I also enjoyed the way you referenced Ozymendias and am glad to see his kin have taken up his interesting method of gathering information.

Great that you will keep writing this story u.u
But i guessed this chapter was a bit short... .-.

You have a good plot here - I was going to write something similar myself...I think Rorschach sounds a bit off because he isn't world-weary enough. Make him sound a bit more depressed and the story will be exponentially better.

following the story

Martian Luther King Jr. was indeed an awesome man, making peace between the Whites and the Greens.

. . . but seriously, you misspelled Martin.

The Night's Plutonian shore is a phrase used in Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven (If you saw it somewhere else than my apologies but this is where I saw it.) . In it, he uses the term to describe were the raven is from. Also, even the name Plutonian shore is a clue, as it could be a reference to Pluto, the Roman god of death. I would venture to guess it could be an interpretation of the underworld, or hell.

Also, I would probably feel safer with family, though I cannot give a good answer as I do not understand the question due to the wording.

Keep up the good work!

Its nice hearing from you after all this time. As for the questions the first one is from a line in Edger Allen Poe's poem "The Raven". As for the second honestly It might be a little bit of both.

1) Hell. Go to Night's Plutonian Shore, and never come back!
2) My dick, you dickless, flat chested evil woman.

Ah, and the plot thickens. I like it. Nice job!

What? You do know that Daniel would be 90, right? In this he acts like he's 60. I'd try to dampen his movement, and speech.
any way, nice job.

Honestly I think you did a fantastic job.