|Reviews for Sent Away|
| GG 6/7/13 . chapter 7
I would say evil. Pure evil.
Like the story too.
| Tikmass 6/6/13 . chapter 7
The name is "Laurie", not Lori.
And I wonder she is a betrayal?! NO NO NO D:
| Kovy- Closet Romantic 6/4/13 . chapter 7
First would be Hitler, the Kim Jong il, Darth Vader, and can't say on the last one
| BitterSweetChaoticSerenity 6/1/13 . chapter 6
Okay, so I read it. I will still read it. I do'nt know why I was so stubborn and didn't read it. It's good. :)
I liked the chapter, and who is this mysterious boy, hmm? Is he like his daddy, cuz I would like that.
Aw, pure little 6th graders! You tainted them! Shame on you!
I hope I wasn't the only one confused...
| freshie 5/31/13 . chapter 2
Of course Hobbits are real , they control the gold markets .
| bloody raptor 5/28/13 . chapter 6
Nice visuals. I also enjoyed the way you referenced Ozymendias and am glad to see his kin have taken up his interesting method of gathering information.
| Tikmass 5/27/13 . chapter 6
Great that you will keep writing this story u.u
But i guessed this chapter was a bit short... .-.
| Eric Crow 4/26/13 . chapter 1
You have a good plot here - I was going to write something similar myself...I think Rorschach sounds a bit off because he isn't world-weary enough. Make him sound a bit more depressed and the story will be exponentially better.
| Tikmass 4/26/13 . chapter 5
following the story
| Doctor Deadpool 4/11/13 . chapter 2
Martian Luther King Jr. was indeed an awesome man, making peace between the Whites and the Greens.
. . . but seriously, you misspelled Martin.
| ThegreatH 4/6/13 . chapter 5
The Night's Plutonian shore is a phrase used in Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven (If you saw it somewhere else than my apologies but this is where I saw it.) . In it, he uses the term to describe were the raven is from. Also, even the name Plutonian shore is a clue, as it could be a reference to Pluto, the Roman god of death. I would venture to guess it could be an interpretation of the underworld, or hell.
Also, I would probably feel safer with family, though I cannot give a good answer as I do not understand the question due to the wording.
Keep up the good work!
| bloody raptor 4/4/13 . chapter 5
Its nice hearing from you after all this time. As for the questions the first one is from a line in Edger Allen Poe's poem "The Raven". As for the second honestly It might be a little bit of both.
| Twinkie216 4/4/13 . chapter 5
1) Hell. Go to Night's Plutonian Shore, and never come back!
2) My dick, you dickless, flat chested evil woman.
Ah, and the plot thickens. I like it. Nice job!
| BitterSweetChaoticSerenity 2/13/13 . chapter 4
What? You do know that Daniel would be 90, right? In this he acts like he's 60. I'd try to dampen his movement, and speech.
any way, nice job.
| bloody raptor 2/10/13 . chapter 4
Honestly I think you did a fantastic job.