I liked this chapter, but I did find myself a little confused at times as to who was talking. When there weren't specific names attached to the dialogue, it wasn't always obvious. It also seemed a little rushed and lacking in detail. I love the quick dialogue you've used in this story because it's so gilmore-esque, but I think this chapter needed more detail than what was given.

So excited for more!

Haha i love matt and chris in every fic! :) Well done, glad to see an update!

Great update ! i love their dynamic :)

"They may have tried to write neatly in the margins, but they always seemed to explode across the pages, hurting themselves and anyone in their way." I like this way of describing their relationship.

I just started reading this story, and I have to say that I love the banter in this chapter between Jess, Matt, and Chris! It's very Gilmore Girls. I love when people are able to write in a way that makes me feel like this is an actual continuation or lost scene from Gilmore Girls. That's the whole reason I read this stuff is that I like the show. Obviously. You hit the nail on the head with the rapid back and forth in this chapter. It's almost confusing as you're reading, but that's perfect because it has that quick tone that Gilmore Girls has. You have to actually pay attention to follow it, but it all makes sense and is entertaining. I love it! Props to you, and I hope to see this level of quality as I keep going along with this story.

They kissed! Ca't wait for them to see each other again.

Okay, this chapter has me over-the-moon! I hardly have words to express it. The way the close of his eyes broke their trance, but even more so how she could tell that he'd not only read it, but that the inflection in his voice (I could hear it...distinctly) told her that it had meant the same thing to him as it had to her. That she had to look away, and that the gentle, understanding smile told her that she wasn't hiding anything from him.

Flawless. Heart-achingly flawless. I'll wrack my brain for what wonderfulness the next chapters could contain.

cant wait to read more

If he cared about the person, he would be [great at pep talks]. Enjoyed this chapter :)
Update soon!

Just get them together!well done

I agree that Jess would be good with the pep talks. I can't wait for more! I want them together already!

what is going to happen next? what is going to happen next?! Haha. I really like your story. I really want to see where you take it! Anyway, yeah I really like it and in a kind of Gilmore mood. Haha. So yeah update soon! I wanna know what happens next!
Alyssa

No tomatoes, the chapter is good. & yes, ice cream makes everything better. Unless you're lactose intolerant.
Update soon!

All of these cliffhangers you're giving me are killing me! Can't wait to see what happens!