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| Reviews for Hologram |
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   zazie.rainy17 5/8/13 . chapter 1Like the story, Although you did kind of shortened it. |
| Rikku Braska 2/9/13 . chapter 1 Thank you, Udon'tknowme, that is sweet :) i may edit it later by the way, to make it longer, cause... i had to shorten it.. |
| Udon'tknowme 2/9/13 . chapter 1 This is really sweet. I think it should have been longer though. Good morale I think it would be a good story to read to children. |
| Angel981 9/12/12 . chapter 1 awww |
| KAGEJASPER 9/12/12 . chapter 1 Yayyyy! (Clap! Clap! Clap!) I like it! The ending was a little rushed, but I still enjoyed it! You said this was graded right? If this was rated from 1-5, it'd give it a 4.3. I say this because the sentences seem a bit choppy and again, the plot seemed a little rushed to me. But other than that, I'm sure you'll get an 'A'-wesome grade! ;) -KAGEJASPER OUT! |
