 The Muse Sway 8/15/07 . chapter 1Or until another pretty woman comes along, Locke thought.
DAMN You Locke why, you're totally right... gr I hate Celes ever since 1994! |
 Codie 1/29/04 . chapter 4Good story, please continue. |
 Rose Cherryblossom 6/19/03 . chapter 4E! I LOVE THIS FRIKKIN STORY! Please hurry up, love! ^_^ *smiles sweetly in hoping for you to start the next chapter for me eing nice* |
 Codie 1/22/03 . chapter 2I dont know..I keep getting an image of one of the others playing a trick on him and it ending up being Edgar or Setzer wearing a wig. That would of been a hoot. Oh well. Get the next chapter up soon please. |
 Sounan 12/25/02 . chapter 2Great story, hurry up with the next chapters too! |
 Nephalim CelesTerra 12/4/02 . chapter 2This is getting really good! I think it's already rather obvious who's Locke secret admirer but I really wonder if this "dream" of Locke was real or not? |
 Nephalim CelesTerra 8/14/02 . chapter 1This going to be continued, right? (at least I hope so) Good start for a fanfic! I only would to give you one advice that would help you if you write the next chapters (or another fanfic)...Don't take too much dialogue straight from the game. I personally don't mind if writers use a lot of dialogue straight from the game, but I've heard from other readers and writers that they don't like it when writers use a lot of dialogue straight from the game...So, what I want to say is that there could be people who doesn't like it if you take a lot of dialogue straight from the game. |
 Cherry3 8/1/02 . chapter 1Holy Turd!Dis wuz sooo frickin' sweet ;_; write more! |
 Rose Cherryblossom 7/25/02 . chapter 1Ahh! Oh pleeze pleeze pleeze pleeze pleeze finish soon! I wanna read more! I luv it! |