|Reviews for Abyss|
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 4/16/13 . chapter 17
| Library2.0 3/7/13 . chapter 16
It was a good chapter for a long wait. Update.
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 3/7/13 . chapter 16
Wow how conflicting this chapter was.
| Drayllien 3/7/13 . chapter 16
Finally a new chapter
keep it up!
| Reading-is-4-life 2/17/13 . chapter 15
Good chapter. Update!
| Mewchu 2/17/13 . chapter 1
This is interesting, and Red seems cold in character.
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 2/17/13 . chapter 15
Wow I'm glad to know you update at least! I'm happy with that!
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 2/3/13 . chapter 14
Don't worry your not the only one!
| Library2.0 2/3/13 . chapter 14
Great chapter. Sometimes though you miss capitalizing.
| DrOctagonapus 2/1/13 . chapter 1
You're misspelling "..." wrong an awful lot. If this story's Red is the one from the game, then perhaps you could incorperate that into the story of actually heting him to talk or something.
Its all up to you, but the story is OoC if it is. After that though, I really like the story and hope you continue it.
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 2/1/13 . chapter 13
Hehe I'll abmit my first chapter of my story wasn't great but that doesn't mean this chappter wasn't! :)
| Library2.0 2/1/13 . chapter 13
It was a great chapter. Update.
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 1/29/13 . chapter 12
Again it's no suprise just keep up the good work! I still LOVE your work in this story!
| Library2.0 1/29/13 . chapter 12
Great chapter. Update soon.
| Chibi-Pandora-hime 1/28/13 . chapter 11
I loved it even if it was short and it's pretty clear in the manga Touko's/Hilda's name is White!