I reeeaally like this! The guys' behaviour and reactions seem very true to the characters' and the flashback was great. That little piece of info that Face gave away in his thoughts was interesting: that he too has been hiding in a restroom stall at some time.
/Belker
PS You go to "edit story" and replace chapter to write a new one. Just upload your old chapter and edit that one DS

Woohoo! Awesome update, sad, but awesome. Next chapter, pweeaseeeee.

I might have to reread the previous chapters to get the continuity of your story again but once again I'm taken by the descriptions of what Face is seeing. He is concerned without being all mushy and sentimental about it. Of course none of the guys would react like a female to one of their own hurting. You kept their masculinity intact and I like that. No, Face shouldn't let this one go. Thanks for dealing with Murdock's pain in the way I think Face (and Murdock, for that matter) would have. I really like this story.

I LOVE IT
IT'S WONDERFUL
UPDATE
'Nuff said
*Batman*

WOW! This flashback was very real in my opinion. Porcelain friend – it was hilarious! I really liked this chapter. The whole story is very good and it hit home to me, the only thing is that you should put the chapters on more frequently, as not only you are a pretty sad fellow...Hint, hint, hint... :)

poor poor murdock. why do you torture him so?!

So glad for an update! Poor Murdock :( Nooooo!

This is very good. I don't mind flashbacks myself since I think they are necessary sometimes to show how a person came to the point they are and, as in this case, why they react the way they do. His attempt, for example, at self-preservation at the beginning of the flashback where he doesn't talk, tries not to speak in his own Southern drawl, could explain why he escapes into so many personas and accents. I like the transition at the end where he realizes it's Face he has pinned. His reaction to what he's done is heartbreaking. Face is definitely going to have a difficult time with him. I eagerly await your next update.

This is getting very interesting, can't wait for the next chapter. Would love to know how Face and the others is going to handle this. Please update soon.

SO glad to see an update in this! Yippee! I wonder if Murdock is tripping out or something.

awwwww my poor murdock! make face make it better! can't wait for the next update! 3

Please keep this story going its a good one I like the way you describe Murdocks madness :)

I absolutely love this story! It's so sad, but it's so realistic! I can picture all of this happening! I really like where you went with this story! Please continue soon!

I'm really loving your story! Poor Murdock... I know how he feels :( Anyway, thanks for sharing and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hope Face can help Murdock and loved B.A's comments from the background and mur