|Reviews for The Spiral|
| T.M Veganstroth 11/18/12 . chapter 2
pretty interesting. This is the first Original Character story I've read, and so far I like it. I might have to re-read it a few times to get a clear mental picture of Air, Itch, and Ana. Other than that, Its interesting. I'll definately be watching for updates.
| Mable 9/15/12 . chapter 2
Look whose back with a brand new fic! :) Glad to see you, and glad to see this. So far the chapter was interested me and has me craving whatever can come next for the three bots. It is a pretty nice change to see AOSTH instead of modern as well. Please continue whenever you can! I'll be waiting to see another of your amazing works.
| Lord Kelvin 9/13/12 . chapter 1
Where's the chapter?
This is a non-story upload. All you've done is post a summary with a bunch of author's notes. That's not allowed. You must post actual story text with every chapter or the admins may axe your account.
You can write for your own enjoyment, but you post for the audience. Right now, you shouldn't want the admins to be part of said audience.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.