Hey.

I really love the way you've portrayed the characters. I wish you would continue it, i would love to know what happens.

Cathloo :-D

Nice chapter, the dialogue between Lara and Kurtis is funny and entertaining and the expressions that they give are described very well :D I wonder what they will discover when they reach the site, and what they would do once they get there :) Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

i choice the both! i can't choice one of them lol hehe

good chapter! and now we need more action!
hehe i hope the next!

Lovely chapter! Can't wait for more :)
And imo, Kurtis should mess with Lara's head, because it's entertaining xD

Kurtis simply excels in teasing Lara in this ff, especially the "aristocratic chatter of the upper class" was awesome! :D I'm not really sure what exactly Kurtis is up to, but I think I want to find out! One little game, please! ;) Great chapter, I especially enjoyed their interaction! :)

Kurtis' thought processes were spot on, characteristic and hilarious! :D

You should update more often! Cant wait to read more! :)

never read a fanfic like this before! like options and choices!
very original! love this!
and im really laughed, very funny kurtis xD

my option is take alister! it would be so much fun!

i hope the next :D

Oooohhh Alister is getting feisty and jealous :D I like it. Please Lara, take him with you and Kurtis! That would be a hilarious triangle XD

I've loved how the students were doing everything they could to hear more! So funny! :D Kurtis is so mean towards Alister! But I love Kurtis' easy-going attitude! :) Take Alister with them! I somehow think he should be the part of this story. ;)

Good chapter, the drama exchange between Kurtis and Lara is carried on into this chapter, and now shy Alistair who seemed silent before is now getting involved :) I like how Lara has created a little competition for the students, so she could choose who goes, nice idea :) Hmmmm, now i'm undecided about whether or not Lara should take Alistair with them, as i'm not at all a fan of the character. It would be interesting to see how he stops them from going, yet his input on the trip may be good and funny. My choice would be to take him along in the trip, just to see what he says etc :)

Don't be silly, this was a great chapter. And Alister is getting so jealous. Suddenly from being shy on the background he starts blackmailing Lara. But it is as Lara says, she's the boss, he won't be able to stop her anyway, right?

I'm curious about the students who can join, about their characters etc. Bring on the next chapter!

Oh, now this is interesting! But I am interesting to see what would happen if they made an excursion out of it. And does that also mean that they would bring Alister with them? :)

Score 1 for Kurtis. Lara missed something!? She must be shocked and curious to know what she missed. A trip back will defininately happen. I prefer it with the students. But, yes i am butting, that entire room of students might be a bit much, perhaps she will make a selection out of the room?

Or did you already have that planned? Either way, great work once again, looking forward to more.

Hey, another great chapter, full of drama and fun between Lara and Kurtis :) I love the exchange between them with Kurtis cheeky joking around with her and Lara doing well to respond back, hehe the students must be enjoying it :) I love the mysteries in this as well, not only do i wonder what happened between Lara and Kurtis in Paris, but I also wonder what Lara missed in the tomb too, i'm sure we'll find out :)
Hmmm, for the choice Lara has to make, i'd go with the little excursion, it would be nice to see the students get involved for a field trip and it would be different :) This is going very well, i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Kurtis 1, Lara 0! xD
Ummm, I can't decide as to how to continue the story... I abstain from voting and pass the responsibility to someone else :P
Keep writing though!