This story looks very interesting. The only problem i have is that the paragraphs are much too long. This makes everything run together and honestly very hard to read. I hope that you take head of my comment and maybe adjust a bit.
The story line looks good though! I hope to come back and read it in the future.

I have no idea what she looks like. Can you tell us because all we know is that she is blonde. Does she look like Captain America? But otherwise... THIS IS AWESOME!

"...Transformers, though terribly written..."

What. Were. You. Thinking? Did you see Rise of the Fall? Because that one was okay but all the others were great! I love Transfomers... *fangirl sobs in corner* haha, I'm sorry I had to put that but I love TF! *pouts*

Cool Story.

:O! AMAZING! You have outdid yourself! This chapter exceeded expectations! You ended this story so well! I am sad to see it end but I know that all good things must come to an end! Magnificent story! Truly one of the best on this site! I am excited to see what happens ion the future for Rebecca and Loki! Oh and thank you for the shout-outs! It is unnecessary but I really do appreciate it! BRAVO my friend Bravo!

OH MY GOSH! I am so happy that you updated! It was well worth the wait though! Amazing chapter my friend! I am so anxious to see how this tale ends!

thats so beautifull cant wait till the sequel

Was going to read this but honestly you need to learn to hit the 'enter' or 'return' key. Reading huge ass chunks of text is not appealing. It won't take much to make it easier on the reader and I hope you make the small adjustment, cause this story does look really good.

-Rayn

i love this cant wait for the next/final chapter

Very good

OH MY GOD! That was amazing! I have chill bumps because of this chapter! In all honesty friend you have out did yourself. This chapter was every bit as phenomenal as I expected it to be! Bravo my friend, Bravo!

omg nooo!

Seeing your update made me smile. Which has been rare with the week that I have been having. I still hope that Rebecca gets her time with Anna! Loki also made me a bit angry in this chapter but hey I loved it! Another great chapter! Bravo!

I don't know how to tell you this but...THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next update!:)

Oh my gosh! I am reading this during my seventh period British Lit class and I started crying! Dear God you are a genius! When her dad left it broke my heart! I so hope that Rebecca takes care of Anna soon enough! I got alot of wierd looks from my classmates let me tell you haha! BRILLIANT!